for Oh Crap8/27/2003 c1 lil'poetgirl
I'm glad you feel so free to write your feelings in this way. I'd avoid the language, but that's just a personal preference. The emotions in this poem come across so well. And i must say, it is pretty twisted. But not a bad poem.
I'm glad you feel so free to write your feelings in this way. I'd avoid the language, but that's just a personal preference. The emotions in this poem come across so well. And i must say, it is pretty twisted. But not a bad poem.
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