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8/11/2004 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I love the imagry and the rhyming, it really fits with the subject of the piece. I really like this one, I can see myself in this situation and I can relate to it. I've had to many relationships like this. Keep up the good work.
9/18/2003 c1 Melancholy Butterfly
Wow...a great poem and agood rhythm.
8/31/2003 c1 19Celia Rose
Wow, I love it. A bit on the eerie side, but it works. Nice flow, great description.
8/23/2003 c1 15Michiru1
Wow... that's about it... wow. Very nice! It seemed to flow very flutently and the tale it told makes you want to know more. picks you're curiousity. Keep up the great work!

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