for Better8/11/2004 c1 
1k+Faithless Juliet
I love the imagry and the rhyming, it really fits with the subject of the piece. I really like this one, I can see myself in this situation and I can relate to it. I've had to many relationships like this. Keep up the good work.
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietI love the imagry and the rhyming, it really fits with the subject of the piece. I really like this one, I can see myself in this situation and I can relate to it. I've had to many relationships like this. Keep up the good work.
Juliet.
8/31/2003 c1 19Celia Rose
Wow, I love it. A bit on the eerie side, but it works. Nice flow, great description.
19Celia RoseWow, I love it. A bit on the eerie side, but it works. Nice flow, great description.