for The Coconut3/24/2004 c1 
17Fairy in Black and White
Wow...this is a great short story! I am just in awe! The descriptions were awesome and the story so sad and beautiful. And it ended on a clear note. Short and concise, it's a true short story. ^_^
17Fairy in Black and WhiteWow...this is a great short story! I am just in awe! The descriptions were awesome and the story so sad and beautiful. And it ended on a clear note. Short and concise, it's a true short story. ^_^
1/4/2004 c1 Meow
GAH! That's...just...crepy...O_O
GAH! That's...just...crepy...O_O
9/2/2003 c1 57tofujunky
Whoa! That was awesome. I'm a huge fan of short stories and Kurt Vonnegut is one of my favorite authors. Your writing style and theme reminds me of some of his work. Excellent! Write more please. I did say please. lol
57tofujunkyWhoa! That was awesome. I'm a huge fan of short stories and Kurt Vonnegut is one of my favorite authors. Your writing style and theme reminds me of some of his work. Excellent! Write more please. I did say please. lol
8/23/2003 c1 1Pyralis Dawn
That was pretty powerful. How does volleyball give you an idea like this? Very good.
1Pyralis DawnThat was pretty powerful. How does volleyball give you an idea like this? Very good.