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for Perfection Has Envious Eyes on You

3/20/2010 c1 Moony08
This is an amazing sonnet!

I like the title, and the "with whispers yo speak such delicate words.."

Nice job!

=D
5/14/2005 c1 icebox3000
Beautifully written. I love it.
1/17/2005 c1 38ScourgeoftheSpanishMain
Get's the point across...It was an effective poem and it deals with an emotion fairly, without the frills that we try to cover it with. I liked it and I think I might read some more of your work...but not now because my attention ought to be elsewhere...bye:).

~The Scourge~
1/9/2005 c1 12tablesalt
Love the rhythm and imagery here. Well done.
3/17/2004 c1 13XxDragon Princess NikkixX
Very good. I do intend to read one of your stories but i don't have the time to do it right now. I have a lot going on but as soon as things calm down a bit i'll get started on it. Thanks for reading Castle Cintyras!
Nikki
11/15/2003 c1 5Naja Copperleaf
Interesting concept. ;)
8/25/2003 c1 3Kars
*grins* I loved it because it's completely true. People hate the things that are most deserving of the opposite. If something shows the slightest hint of being considered 'perfect', all anyone can muster I hate.
8/25/2003 c1 Joflower
I like the end. Very good!
8/23/2003 c1 5Aegee
Nice little twist at the end.

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