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8/26/2003 c1 Identitycrisis
Fictionpress is acting up again. I can't seem to login.

Anyway, this piece was cool. All the little hints you dropped along the way. And when you said sexual, all the images came in. Cool work, its unique and sorta seductive. I liked it.
8/24/2003 c1 49recalcitrant
i thought that was wicked good. your descriptions are very poetic but sometimes its seems like its too poetic. i think however that u keep that consistancy in language that it doesnt really matter and it becomes all good. your an awesome writer. r+r my stuff if u want
8/24/2003 c1 3Angerona
whe what fun this was to read. i have a dirty mind and the second you said sexual my mind just went away with it's self hehe!

Horrid piece of poetry? bah this was great. i liked the last stansa its was my fav hehe!

Loved it keep writing!

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