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11/30/2004 c1 32Angel-Angel
OMG!Apoem with moths in it...*Angel runs off shrieking down the fiction press hall* lolGod how i hate moths...Brilliant poem tho huni x

Angelx
12/3/2003 c1 7Little-sunandstars
Beautiful and sad all at the same time, but isn't that the way most beautiful things are? It's always been a source or interest as to why moths run into the light and die. Well, good job and keep writing.
10/18/2003 c1 18Night Breeze
Wow very NICE! You're good with words! Keep on writing...

~NB XoX
9/12/2003 c1 96AutumnRhapsody
I love how it says paper moon...I just imagine a Japanese house, w/tatami mats (right?) and paper walls and it's such a lovely picture, with the moon over trees outside the window, not that this has anything to do w/the poem, really, but it inspires such a great feeling.
9/2/2003 c1 77thaiswirl
very nice great haiku!
9/2/2003 c1 40AvaRicE
Short and sweet.

It creates an image in the readers mind, despite the briefness.

Perfect :)
9/1/2003 c1 Kakyou Takashiro
simply perfection.
8/31/2003 c1 47The intellect
moths linger like death... gothy but agen beautiful in an eerie sort of way... i love the paper moon theory in this... pretty and delicate, yet deadly (to the moths)

the intellect
8/28/2003 c1 57teh tarik
Wow, this is amazing! I love the imagery! Write more! ^_^
8/26/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
Oh, you've certainly written very well! Kudos!
8/26/2003 c1 3Ruby-servantof-eli
You really have something against moths don't you?

Really good as usual *sigh*
8/25/2003 c1 210Kelpylion
You painted the scene very well-I like.
8/25/2003 c1 612simpleplan13
I like this haiku im not sure how moths linger like death but it really works here
8/25/2003 c1 161chairmanmeow
Wow! Good imagery! I love it.
8/24/2003 c1 18wanderingcloud
Vivid: your description gives very clear mental pictures. Wonderful job!

~Elfie

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