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11/25/2013 c1 2MissieMaroo
Very touching. I like this poem quite a bit. A great insight on death, from a working animal's perspective. :)
8/31/2003 c1 14selah
this is a different side of the story you don't hear often. I like it. :) i liked all the interesting adjectives you used in your stanzas. nicely done.

keep writing.

selah~
8/27/2003 c1 3careless whisper
Umm it was ok. Your personifaction wasn't exactly the most exciting thing and the poem did seem a bit heavy and dragging but overall ok.

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