for Good enough?7/20/2005 c1 Akiko Suzuki
I feel like that sometimes to, parents not liking how I act, but other parents like me just fine...
I feel like that sometimes to, parents not liking how I act, but other parents like me just fine...
3/17/2004 c1 
7ku
you sort of imply that the standards of other parents are correct while the standards and values of your parents are wrong (because they don't conform to that of the majority).
7kuyou sort of imply that the standards of other parents are correct while the standards and values of your parents are wrong (because they don't conform to that of the majority).
1/30/2004 c1 54ByFireAndMoonlight
I so understant this, It's kind of like the poem u reviewed of mine! we can relate alot in this regaurd!
54ByFireAndMoonlightI so understant this, It's kind of like the poem u reviewed of mine! we can relate alot in this regaurd!
9/20/2003 c1 8cramer
umm... sob? this is sad. but as i always say... ur twinkie won't be creamed unless you got the right twinkie and ur fav creame.
8cramerumm... sob? this is sad. but as i always say... ur twinkie won't be creamed unless you got the right twinkie and ur fav creame.
8/31/2003 c1 2Tomboy-Toby
This really touches me. Good work. I can see that you put a lot of difficult emotions in. The ones from these confusing years are often the hardest to convey, but you did it in a blatant, but very creative format. I look forward to more of your works.
2Tomboy-TobyThis really touches me. Good work. I can see that you put a lot of difficult emotions in. The ones from these confusing years are often the hardest to convey, but you did it in a blatant, but very creative format. I look forward to more of your works.
8/27/2003 c1 74LadyAnesta
i don't know what to say, other than
the repitition and caps lock made this poem even more powerful...and keep
writing!
~Anesta
74LadyAnestai don't know what to say, other than
the repitition and caps lock made this poem even more powerful...and keep
writing!
~Anesta
8/25/2003 c1 9Dante Gemini
This is a great poem. A lot of times, I can definitely relate to this. Great voice.
9Dante GeminiThis is a great poem. A lot of times, I can definitely relate to this. Great voice.
8/25/2003 c1 53Punky Monkey
Im a little confused. Are you trying to say that society expects kids to grow up taking drugs and being in gangs and ur sorry that you dont copy everyone else because you are your own person? (I may have got totally the wrong end of the stick o well!)
53Punky MonkeyIm a little confused. Are you trying to say that society expects kids to grow up taking drugs and being in gangs and ur sorry that you dont copy everyone else because you are your own person? (I may have got totally the wrong end of the stick o well!)