12/7/2008 c1 Language Lover
Your story is really funny and quite amazing. It has no grammar mistakes or spelling mistakes unlike many other stories I've seen here (including mine). It's funny how hypocritical I can be.
Your story is really funny and quite amazing. It has no grammar mistakes or spelling mistakes unlike many other stories I've seen here (including mine). It's funny how hypocritical I can be.
12/7/2006 c9 Julia D. Castwyth
That was absolutely amazing! I just read the entire thing, straight through, and I desperately wish there were more chapters! You are most definitely going on my favorites list, as is this story! Update soon!
Blessed Be!
~Julia D. Castwyth
That was absolutely amazing! I just read the entire thing, straight through, and I desperately wish there were more chapters! You are most definitely going on my favorites list, as is this story! Update soon!
Blessed Be!
~Julia D. Castwyth
9/25/2006 c9 AJ
Just when are you going to get the next chapter up. We are waiting and some of us are starting to get angry at the lack of an update. Apease us by updating or suffer our wrath.
Just when are you going to get the next chapter up. We are waiting and some of us are starting to get angry at the lack of an update. Apease us by updating or suffer our wrath.
7/25/2005 c9 3Sindri
This is singularly one of the most erotic fictions I have ever read. Good for you. You're on my fav list...
-Icebrrg aka Jamie
This is singularly one of the most erotic fictions I have ever read. Good for you. You're on my fav list...
-Icebrrg aka Jamie
11/22/2004 c8 Ratri
HI! I just found your story, although you haven't updated in a while. Anyway I really like it so far...and Lunaru is cool. Really cool. And nifty. And he's a special character. He's spifty!I really really really hope you update this soon, but don't force yourself to write. -Vandy
HI! I just found your story, although you haven't updated in a while. Anyway I really like it so far...and Lunaru is cool. Really cool. And nifty. And he's a special character. He's spifty!I really really really hope you update this soon, but don't force yourself to write. -Vandy
11/10/2004 c8 1Namishka
you're a sophomore? wait a minute, would that be more of the college title or a high school title? i'm pretty sure it's the former, not the latter. hey, i actually like both of the stories. i like all of your stories, come to think about it.
you're a sophomore? wait a minute, would that be more of the college title or a high school title? i'm pretty sure it's the former, not the latter. hey, i actually like both of the stories. i like all of your stories, come to think about it.
9/12/2004 c2 1Namishka
YOU SO BETTER UPDATE YOUR STORIES OR I'M GOING TO FIND OUT WHERE YOU LIVE AND COMEOVER AND KILL YOU MYSELF! i love your stories. upday goddammit!
YOU SO BETTER UPDATE YOUR STORIES OR I'M GOING TO FIND OUT WHERE YOU LIVE AND COMEOVER AND KILL YOU MYSELF! i love your stories. upday goddammit!
7/31/2004 c7 Name
It is such a cool story...but the updates take forever...:(
It is such a cool story...but the updates take forever...:(
7/30/2004 c7 Namishka
that was funny. Kokero finally shouted out that he loved Shijiko after all the "i didn't just think about that. That can't be right." sentences.
that was funny. Kokero finally shouted out that he loved Shijiko after all the "i didn't just think about that. That can't be right." sentences.