for The Floor6/26/2005 c1 Faithiny
Short. Simple. Sweet. Well written. The short sentences convey the pain better than any long ones would. I really enjoy your use of commas. Way to go!
Short. Simple. Sweet. Well written. The short sentences convey the pain better than any long ones would. I really enjoy your use of commas. Way to go!
8/25/2003 c1 
38Lex C
Nice format, short and lovely. Reminds me of something my friend is going through right now. I'll show it to him *adds to favorites list*
38Lex CNice format, short and lovely. Reminds me of something my friend is going through right now. I'll show it to him *adds to favorites list*
8/25/2003 c1 8EBS
I'm so sorry that I didn't get in touch with you before hand, but I didn't know if I were leaving the school till this morning. I couldn't find your email either. I forgot about this website, but I signed your guestbook on your website because I wanted you to email me so I could tell you and to also get your new email.
Please email me at
Please, bye, Elise
8EBSI'm so sorry that I didn't get in touch with you before hand, but I didn't know if I were leaving the school till this morning. I couldn't find your email either. I forgot about this website, but I signed your guestbook on your website because I wanted you to email me so I could tell you and to also get your new email.
Please email me at
Please, bye, Elise