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12/19/2004 c9 unsweetened
great story, i am sad that its over because i really loved it. Thank you so very much for finishing it, i think you did a great job with the character, though its sad to know that sam dies. Hope to read something else by you very soon,Vic
12/12/2004 c9 18Aidrianna
okay... *is speechless*

i think i am going to cry. that's so sad.

i mean, i'm not going to go on a rampage and tell you that you are evil and so on... not every story has a happy ending...

but wow

that's sad

well..in any case...thank you for updating, and finally finishing this story... even though it's really depressing...
12/11/2004 c9 anonymous
Shelly! I do hope you remember me. This makes me sad, but it's still strangely lovely and appropriate, in a way. Your email didn't show up in your A/N, but ..oh wait, I guess I can just look at your bio. Hmm so I hope things are going well with you, with school [if I'm not mistaken?], with writing, with everything else. Perhaps we'll talk sooner or later. =)
12/11/2004 c9 2Lena Carta
Oy. I completely understand where you're coming from... don't be sorry, it was excellent. I finished it crying too, heh. Just because a story doesn't go where we thought it originally would doesn't mean it's somehow subpar, and same if it has to be written differently than the original plan (I'm assuming this is what's giving you grief over it). Like you said, not something you can change. Forces drag you along where they want you to go, and all you can do is write it, and you write it spectacularly. Much thanks for providing the entertainment and tearjerking. =)
12/11/2004 c9 1Casara
I'm crying, but i understand. Bravo.
12/11/2004 c9 lisa
you killed sam...
8/11/2004 c8 7The Final Dream
Amazing. That is all I have to say.
7/9/2004 c8 MizUnDastood887
OMG! I love this story so much! I loved the first one Eight of Nine and i was super excited to see that u made a sequel. You are a very good writer, never stop.
P.S. Ashleigh is just the cuestest thing ever!
5/31/2004 c8 18Aidrianna
yay! you're back! with an update! and not something new! i was all confused there...you were all like "ok i'm gonna make it completely different" and as i'm reading it i'm going "ok this is pretty much the same" but you know what, that's good because i liked the old version. i'm glad it didn't go into your abandoned folder. it was too good a story to just stop. hopefully there won't be another scare like that.
5/28/2004 c8 5mikeharm
good to have you back! great job with the original, and the sequel.. i'll be looking for updates.
5/28/2004 c8 12Little Mermaid
lolzz that was so adorable. i don't think ANY guy would be saying that if the girl was naked. YAY you're back. i've missed you...
update asap
5/27/2004 c8 1Shalea
It's great to see you back. I want you to update too. NOW! PLEASE?
*~*LIYAH*~*
5/27/2004 c8 2Lena Carta
I don't think you have any idea how absolutely wonderful this story is. The characters are so real and loveable, it's impossible not to get attached to them and get drawn in. Just amazing, really, I love it. You're a phenomenal writer.
5/27/2004 c8 2BlearyEyes
Feels good to have you back - you're one of the best writers on fp.com.
5/27/2004 c8 casara
it feels good to have you back. keep on writing, i love it.
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