for My Guardian7/31/2004 c1 Ephemeral Seraphim
I love twists! This was a fantastic piece of writing. It was very cute, and you've done a very nice job. Keep up the good work. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo
I love twists! This was a fantastic piece of writing. It was very cute, and you've done a very nice job. Keep up the good work. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo
12/14/2003 c1 PainKiller
Hehe... I thought perhaps the poem was going to be very dark, possibly angsty. I liked the turn near the end. Nice work!
Hehe... I thought perhaps the poem was going to be very dark, possibly angsty. I liked the turn near the end. Nice work!
11/17/2003 c1 
54rainbowskye
I like how there is a twist of sorts at the end. I think that the language nearer the start of the poem is beautiful (quite mystic as well) and then it becomes more naturalistic and real seeming.
54rainbowskyeI like how there is a twist of sorts at the end. I think that the language nearer the start of the poem is beautiful (quite mystic as well) and then it becomes more naturalistic and real seeming.
9/16/2003 c1 IntergalacticOctopoda
:) hm, wonderful. made me smile, which i needed, thanx! oh, nice poem
:) hm, wonderful. made me smile, which i needed, thanx! oh, nice poem
9/3/2003 c1 4ColorCrayons
cute, i liked it. but you forgot to mention that her breath stinks and that she likes to jump on me while im sleeping on your floor and wake me up. but cute just the same
~color outside the lines~
4ColorCrayonscute, i liked it. but you forgot to mention that her breath stinks and that she likes to jump on me while im sleeping on your floor and wake me up. but cute just the same
~color outside the lines~