for Fall is Here9/8/2003 c1 
35Mime
Yep, fall's here!
...only in southern Calif., all we get is sunshine...*looks up at the sky mournfully* Ah, will it ever rain?
*Wink* Great poem, really.
Also, a couple of FP poets and myself have gathered to organize a search for FP writer Princess Mulan, who seems to have disappeared sometime this past May. We are writing and auctioning poems towards the search. With the auctioned money, we hope to hire a private investigator. To read more about the search, you can visit: Http:/w.helpfindprincessmulan.0catch.com. Your help will be greatly appreciated!
35MimeYep, fall's here!
...only in southern Calif., all we get is sunshine...*looks up at the sky mournfully* Ah, will it ever rain?
*Wink* Great poem, really.
Also, a couple of FP poets and myself have gathered to organize a search for FP writer Princess Mulan, who seems to have disappeared sometime this past May. We are writing and auctioning poems towards the search. With the auctioned money, we hope to hire a private investigator. To read more about the search, you can visit: Http:/w.helpfindprincessmulan.0catch.com. Your help will be greatly appreciated!
9/5/2003 c1 58Alyx Bradford
Beautiful. I love autumn, it's my favorite season.
My only criticism is the rhyme scheme - it seems a little forced in places, and sort of detracts from the otherwise lovely nature of the poem. But that could just be me, I'm not a fan of rhyming poetry.
Nice job. :)
58Alyx BradfordBeautiful. I love autumn, it's my favorite season.
My only criticism is the rhyme scheme - it seems a little forced in places, and sort of detracts from the otherwise lovely nature of the poem. But that could just be me, I'm not a fan of rhyming poetry.
Nice job. :)