for Swords, Hearts, Skull, and Crossbones12/8/2007 c12 Evenstar1389
yo i quite enjoyed the story... Love it that there wasnt love at first sight... but i never did find out where Zale's dad disappeared to. Though i suspect him to have defected too.
yo i quite enjoyed the story... Love it that there wasnt love at first sight... but i never did find out where Zale's dad disappeared to. Though i suspect him to have defected too.
5/2/2004 c11 Rose Shard
When I read the last chapter, I thought Zale was gonna die! I'm glad he didn't though. :) Now that Caitlyn and Zale are 'officially' in love, I'm really interested to see what happens next! Please update soon!
When I read the last chapter, I thought Zale was gonna die! I'm glad he didn't though. :) Now that Caitlyn and Zale are 'officially' in love, I'm really interested to see what happens next! Please update soon!
4/20/2004 c10 
22All The Three Queens
Great descriptions in this chapter. I really liked how the "rebels" had so much planned out and were able to keep the invaders guessing.
22All The Three QueensGreat descriptions in this chapter. I really liked how the "rebels" had so much planned out and were able to keep the invaders guessing.
4/5/2004 c9 All The Three Queens
Aww, finally! And I really liked your description of Zale fighting. It was so easy to envision it.
Aww, finally! And I really liked your description of Zale fighting. It was so easy to envision it.
3/21/2004 c3 2Jamez
Wow. You are an extremely excelent writer! That was awsome! And very descriptive and interesting and exciting. You'd think Zale would be able to defend himself against Zayne. Hehe she showed him. Anyways, keep writing!
James ^_^
2JamezWow. You are an extremely excelent writer! That was awsome! And very descriptive and interesting and exciting. You'd think Zale would be able to defend himself against Zayne. Hehe she showed him. Anyways, keep writing!
James ^_^
3/17/2004 c8 Rose Shard
This is getting so exciting! Please update soon! Oh, I can't wait!
~Rose Shard
This is getting so exciting! Please update soon! Oh, I can't wait!
~Rose Shard
3/15/2004 c5 2Du Soleil Oriental
I was just wondering if Kidd was Welsh, the name, not the character. In Welsh "dd" (a letter of the alphabet) is pronounced "th"
I was just curious that Kidd might be Kith...but anyway, I'm off to the next chapter.
2Du Soleil OrientalI was just wondering if Kidd was Welsh, the name, not the character. In Welsh "dd" (a letter of the alphabet) is pronounced "th"
I was just curious that Kidd might be Kith...but anyway, I'm off to the next chapter.
3/15/2004 c1 2Jamez
You're amazing! How can you write so much? This story is already great and I'm only about to start the second chapter. I'm very impressed and please keep writing...I'll catch up to where you left off eventually because I know I'll keep reading this!
James
2JamezYou're amazing! How can you write so much? This story is already great and I'm only about to start the second chapter. I'm very impressed and please keep writing...I'll catch up to where you left off eventually because I know I'll keep reading this!
James
3/7/2004 c2 10DarkSorceress
This is getting good. I am really enjoying the setting and Zayne and Zale's characters.
-DarkSorceress
10DarkSorceressThis is getting good. I am really enjoying the setting and Zayne and Zale's characters.
-DarkSorceress
3/7/2004 c1 DarkSorceress
Wow this story is really good. You've captivated my interest and you wont to worry about me reading the rest.
One suggestion though, when describing peoples height, dont use numbers like 5'10, 6'1, instead compare the character to another character (ie, "she stood no taller than his chest")
Also, I would like to point out that you a good at writing action scenes, and develope your characters strongly.
_DarkSorceress
Wow this story is really good. You've captivated my interest and you wont to worry about me reading the rest.
One suggestion though, when describing peoples height, dont use numbers like 5'10, 6'1, instead compare the character to another character (ie, "she stood no taller than his chest")
Also, I would like to point out that you a good at writing action scenes, and develope your characters strongly.
_DarkSorceress
3/5/2004 c7 22All The Three Queens
Cute. Although, I have to point out the language, again. I kinda doubt that a pirate (at least one from the time period I'm picturing as I'm reading this) would say "later." But other than that, it's good!
22All The Three QueensCute. Although, I have to point out the language, again. I kinda doubt that a pirate (at least one from the time period I'm picturing as I'm reading this) would say "later." But other than that, it's good!
3/4/2004 c7 Rose Shard
Wow! Great, new chapter! ...but it's a real cliffhanger...could you update soon? Please?
~Rose Shard
Wow! Great, new chapter! ...but it's a real cliffhanger...could you update soon? Please?
~Rose Shard
2/10/2004 c6 All The Three Queens
Okay, I'm a little confused... Did they fall asleep in the tavern, or did I miss something?
Okay, I'm a little confused... Did they fall asleep in the tavern, or did I miss something?