for Swords, Hearts, Skull, and Crossbones2/10/2004 c6 Rose Shard
Wow! Great update! Like another review said, I think it was good how Zale and Caitlyn's relationship formed slowly. And as for this chapter, I'm not sure if they are really in love or if it's just the alcohol getting to them...
~Rose Shard
Wow! Great update! Like another review said, I think it was good how Zale and Caitlyn's relationship formed slowly. And as for this chapter, I'm not sure if they are really in love or if it's just the alcohol getting to them...
~Rose Shard
2/5/2004 c5 
22All The Three Queens
I like how you're developing Zale and Zayne/Caitlyn's relationship slowly. So many people have their characters hating each other one minute, and the next, they're head-over-heels in love. Good job!
22All The Three QueensI like how you're developing Zale and Zayne/Caitlyn's relationship slowly. So many people have their characters hating each other one minute, and the next, they're head-over-heels in love. Good job!
2/2/2004 c4 All The Three Queens
This is cool! I really hope you continue. One thing, though... the dialogue reads like a modern-day story at points, and unless I'm mistaken, it isn't. Just a thought...
This is cool! I really hope you continue. One thing, though... the dialogue reads like a modern-day story at points, and unless I'm mistaken, it isn't. Just a thought...
1/22/2004 c4 Rose Shard
Wow! I love the story! (Or what you have so far...) I think it was interesting how Zale joined up with the Death Raiders and how his king is really the bad guy! (I thought the pirates were evil!) ~Rose Shard
Wow! I love the story! (Or what you have so far...) I think it was interesting how Zale joined up with the Death Raiders and how his king is really the bad guy! (I thought the pirates were evil!) ~Rose Shard
1/19/2004 c4 1StarryNight04
Congrats! Yours is the first pirate fic i have ever read that is not lame! You actually made me a believer. Great story! I cannot wait for your next update. :)
1StarryNight04Congrats! Yours is the first pirate fic i have ever read that is not lame! You actually made me a believer. Great story! I cannot wait for your next update. :)
1/19/2004 c4 6FXRG
I love this story! It's just the type I fancy. I hope you don't abandon it... Anyway, keep up the good work!
6FXRGI love this story! It's just the type I fancy. I hope you don't abandon it... Anyway, keep up the good work!
1/12/2004 c3 3BlueCrystal
Hey! This is a great, great story! I really like all the characters that you've introduced so far and Zale is a pretty cool guy. I really like your character's names too. They're very fun. Please update soon!
3BlueCrystalHey! This is a great, great story! I really like all the characters that you've introduced so far and Zale is a pretty cool guy. I really like your character's names too. They're very fun. Please update soon!
12/30/2003 c1 Guest
Why won't fp.com authors realize that there are as many pirate fics as there are fics starring teenage girls.
Why won't fp.com authors realize that there are as many pirate fics as there are fics starring teenage girls.
12/30/2003 c2 3Allora Gale
Oh, I LOVE pirate stories! Please hurry with the next chapter. This is great.
3Allora GaleOh, I LOVE pirate stories! Please hurry with the next chapter. This is great.
12/14/2003 c1 2Heidi Mackenzie
Wow, this is cool. I like it! Good luck in your writing...if all your stories are as good as this one, then you'll have a future!
~ Heidi
2Heidi MackenzieWow, this is cool. I like it! Good luck in your writing...if all your stories are as good as this one, then you'll have a future!
~ Heidi
9/26/2003 c1 1labrat47
Oh...
Tis intriguing...
EVIL CLIFFIE! NO!
WRITE MORE SOON! I CAN ONLY STAY IN SUSPENSE FOR SO LONG!
1labrat47Oh...
Tis intriguing...
EVIL CLIFFIE! NO!
WRITE MORE SOON! I CAN ONLY STAY IN SUSPENSE FOR SO LONG!
9/9/2003 c1 3BlueDragon11
KOOL! n_n Can't wait to see what happens next...but I do have some uumm...critical coments about it. I'm sorry. I don't wanna bring you down or anything, but I feel like I have to say it. Some parts of the story is pretty cliche, and there's this one part where they get the keys and then break open the lock...Why DO they need to keys, if they're gonna break the lock? Okay...besides that stuff, your story is well written.
3BlueDragon11KOOL! n_n Can't wait to see what happens next...but I do have some uumm...critical coments about it. I'm sorry. I don't wanna bring you down or anything, but I feel like I have to say it. Some parts of the story is pretty cliche, and there's this one part where they get the keys and then break open the lock...Why DO they need to keys, if they're gonna break the lock? Okay...besides that stuff, your story is well written.
9/3/2003 c1 22All The Three Queens
Way cool! I really, really like this. It's so readable. Update soon, please!
22All The Three QueensWay cool! I really, really like this. It's so readable. Update soon, please!