for Silver Arrow10/3/2003 c1 
9Aimie Goldberg
For that being your first poem since school you write VERY well. I am not typically much of a poetry person, but this really speaks to me and I feel like I know exactly what you mean. You have great ideas keep writing them down!
9Aimie GoldbergFor that being your first poem since school you write VERY well. I am not typically much of a poetry person, but this really speaks to me and I feel like I know exactly what you mean. You have great ideas keep writing them down!
9/21/2003 c1 4FrOg-On-A-lIlY-pAd
i like the personification in this. It really gives a great image of an arrow and its thinkin. I think the last line finises the poem well, but i dnot really understand the last two lines! it does give a sense of finish but i ont understand! but hey! keep writin poems, they rock!
foalp. xx
4FrOg-On-A-lIlY-pAdi like the personification in this. It really gives a great image of an arrow and its thinkin. I think the last line finises the poem well, but i dnot really understand the last two lines! it does give a sense of finish but i ont understand! but hey! keep writin poems, they rock!
foalp. xx