for The Trouble with Boys8/21/2005 c3 
4Nightshade belle
I have not read all of it yet but so far so good. I like the image of the guy on the motorcycle. I mean what girl hasn't dreamed of a leather clad bad ass on a Harley.*grin* Keep up the good work.
Hey check out my story "The Watch Dog" and plz review. I hope u like it.
4Nightshade belleI have not read all of it yet but so far so good. I like the image of the guy on the motorcycle. I mean what girl hasn't dreamed of a leather clad bad ass on a Harley.*grin* Keep up the good work.
Hey check out my story "The Watch Dog" and plz review. I hope u like it.
6/2/2005 c20 peacock
i really like this story. it has a great plot, and a lot of potential. i wish you would keep writing it and updating as often as possible, but if you give up on it, then i guess it's ok w/ me. i just really suggest continuing w/ your story. and if you won't, would you mind answering my questions? what are they testing them for? will caro end up w/ dren or drake? and is dren in on it to, since drake instinctively doesn't trust him? i would really love to hear back from you.
i really like this story. it has a great plot, and a lot of potential. i wish you would keep writing it and updating as often as possible, but if you give up on it, then i guess it's ok w/ me. i just really suggest continuing w/ your story. and if you won't, would you mind answering my questions? what are they testing them for? will caro end up w/ dren or drake? and is dren in on it to, since drake instinctively doesn't trust him? i would really love to hear back from you.
2/3/2005 c20 3Dark Arrow
Hey, I just read the whole story in one day and it's really good! I liked it, and I like that Drake boy, I think he's cool. You're doing an excellent job, though a few minor mistakes, but it happens to every author. So keep up the good work and update ASAP! Plz!
3Dark ArrowHey, I just read the whole story in one day and it's really good! I liked it, and I like that Drake boy, I think he's cool. You're doing an excellent job, though a few minor mistakes, but it happens to every author. So keep up the good work and update ASAP! Plz!
12/4/2004 c20 Dragen Eyez
I did NOT die OR fall off the face of the earth... I just had a bad time for awhile... I haven't checked my e-mail until, well, today. I had 90 messages. Now i'm going through them. It is hell.
Caro has new powers? I am curious about this. What sort of new powers?
I did NOT die OR fall off the face of the earth... I just had a bad time for awhile... I haven't checked my e-mail until, well, today. I had 90 messages. Now i'm going through them. It is hell.
Caro has new powers? I am curious about this. What sort of new powers?
10/18/2004 c19 unsweetened
great chapter, and im so glad that you've finally updated. i love how everything fits together and i can't wait until you update again and explain everything that's going on
great chapter, and im so glad that you've finally updated. i love how everything fits together and i can't wait until you update again and explain everything that's going on
9/16/2004 c18 2DruBlack
This is good, i really like it. It seemed a lot like Blood and Chocolate at first though. it's a wee bit confusing, but hey, it's fiction right?
2DruBlackThis is good, i really like it. It seemed a lot like Blood and Chocolate at first though. it's a wee bit confusing, but hey, it's fiction right?
9/11/2004 c18 Mindbane
hello tis I again. very good chappy I like the vampire twist very good idea. not much more to say.
yours evily
mindbane
hello tis I again. very good chappy I like the vampire twist very good idea. not much more to say.
yours evily
mindbane
9/9/2004 c18 selective inspiration
woo! i knew it. great job with the chapter and with putting everything together, while the Were might not be very organized, you definately are... with your story, that is. I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter.
I don't review much, but for this story I'll make an exception, cause i love it that much.
Vic
woo! i knew it. great job with the chapter and with putting everything together, while the Were might not be very organized, you definately are... with your story, that is. I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter.
I don't review much, but for this story I'll make an exception, cause i love it that much.
Vic
9/8/2004 c18 Dragen Eyez
*waves* hi! A twist in the plot! What's next? huh, huh? *Waits impatiently* your writing is getting better. did you know i made less corrections this time? really! isn't that great? better is good! er..i'm really tired...so i'm goin' to sleep
*waves* hi! A twist in the plot! What's next? huh, huh? *Waits impatiently* your writing is getting better. did you know i made less corrections this time? really! isn't that great? better is good! er..i'm really tired...so i'm goin' to sleep
9/3/2004 c17 Mindbane
hey tis I once more again for the 17 time. ^_^. well nice chapter but I thought that caro hated drake but now it seems like she has forgiven him for cheating on her in the first chapter. well not much else to say.
yours evily
mindbane
hey tis I once more again for the 17 time. ^_^. well nice chapter but I thought that caro hated drake but now it seems like she has forgiven him for cheating on her in the first chapter. well not much else to say.
yours evily
mindbane
8/31/2004 c17 Dragen Eyez
yay! pretty story! i can't wait to see the next chappie before everyone else! *is still in awe of that* anywayz.. yeah..good chappie..you're gettin' better at writing!
yay! pretty story! i can't wait to see the next chappie before everyone else! *is still in awe of that* anywayz.. yeah..good chappie..you're gettin' better at writing!
8/15/2004 c16 Dragen Eyez
you know...it's fun reading the story straight through with all of the corrections. it took FOREVER to edit this chapter, but it was a lot of fun since i had decent material to work with.. this ended up being an excellent chapter with some fabulous descriptions and overall it flowed very well. good job my lil authoress!
you know...it's fun reading the story straight through with all of the corrections. it took FOREVER to edit this chapter, but it was a lot of fun since i had decent material to work with.. this ended up being an excellent chapter with some fabulous descriptions and overall it flowed very well. good job my lil authoress!
8/10/2004 c15 Mindbane
gah another cliffy you enjoy doing that to much. twaps for being to long in updating. but I fogive you now. very good chapter though what happened to dren in all this as for the rest very good ish curios as to what they are doing to them. waits for more updates and hopes they will be sooner this time.
yours evily
mindbane
gah another cliffy you enjoy doing that to much. twaps for being to long in updating. but I fogive you now. very good chapter though what happened to dren in all this as for the rest very good ish curios as to what they are doing to them. waits for more updates and hopes they will be sooner this time.
yours evily
mindbane
8/9/2004 c15 8Dragen Eyez
wee! you said i did a good job! *GRINS* yeah..anyway.. this is where i get to tell you...that even though i made horrible markings all over your story... it is wonderful! ^_^ AND i can't wait for the next chapter.. i can't wait to see what happens with Caro's love life! (HA! and -i- get to read it all FIRST! GO ME!)
8Dragen Eyezwee! you said i did a good job! *GRINS* yeah..anyway.. this is where i get to tell you...that even though i made horrible markings all over your story... it is wonderful! ^_^ AND i can't wait for the next chapter.. i can't wait to see what happens with Caro's love life! (HA! and -i- get to read it all FIRST! GO ME!)
7/5/2004 c5 bewaryofsquirrels
im not very gd at reviews so ill just say i like it adn think its gd..
Have you every read blood and chocolate? i love that book... if you haven't i suggest u read it. judgin from your fic you should like it.
im not very gd at reviews so ill just say i like it adn think its gd..
Have you every read blood and chocolate? i love that book... if you haven't i suggest u read it. judgin from your fic you should like it.