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9/26/2003 c1 11The Lady Assassin
I like both this poem and the "As I walk out of a door" poem. Interesting taking two seperate takes on the same situation. The first seems written in innocence...hopeful, excited, scared, and finally hopeful again. The "New Beginnings" seems more drawn from someone who is older, who has had more experience, and who no longer looks at the "new" with quite so much innocence...more with trepidation than hopefulness or excitement.

I like them both!
9/11/2003 c1 9Magentian
Khehehe! Good point! I know this feeling... It's hard to work up the motivation to do anything or feel anything. After all, it's all the same in the end. It might not be a wonderful argument for going out and living your life, but I like it anyway. Nice ending.

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