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9/7/2004 c1 5Rosebud O'R
Nice. It has a nice ring to it.
8/8/2004 c1 9Mormon Princess 1
4/6/2004 c1 34Angry Fairy
i normally don't like this topic but i like the way u wrote it. it is a very good poem. great job
2/28/2004 c1 56Kingdoms
DaenergysstormBorn Posted a copy of this on her LiveJournal. That's where I read this first so I thought i'd come here to review it.
Very nicely written poem and one that I can partly relate to.
All the things you wish you'd said...It's something that I myself want to write a poem about but just can't find the right words to make it work. Nice work...
2/26/2004 c1 41DaenerysStormBorn
I know this is a bizarre request i wonder if you might let me put this on my journal... with your name of course.. not claim it as my work... i would link it to the site and stuff...
1/24/2004 c1 Peachez 24
That was an interesting little poem. Had a nice litl aswell. It has a feeling of begging. Like if it could it draw him back to you on its own. A lovely use of words and a kind of a classic tale. Keep writing!
Peachez ^_~
1/23/2004 c1 418Amethyst Horizon
it's kind of scary how you write about my exact feelings in detail...i love it though! you're poems are amzing! and you have wonderful talent!
12/14/2003 c1 21CaramelCream
Wow. and more wow. i like this alot. I can relate. There are alot of things i wish i could take back...
11/29/2003 c1 52Will Klemm
i related to this one because i myself have been on my knees begging for my lover to come back to me. the last 1/3 of the poem, you realy change the direction, making it even more personal, but at the same time, also make it cover other feelings one has at that point and time. And the last line, a shock to the reader. Kick ass job.
9/5/2003 c1 51Demortes
from the little I read, the tale of love.

I lived through it, I wish I could have did a lot of different things.

If you want to ramble or talk, let me know :) My email address is listed in my profile.

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