for Song of the System1/10/2004 c1 
20Kokeshi088
Another great work! You're way better than I am.
I love how original you're poems are. Keep it up!
~Kokeshi088~
*another impossibly short review by Kokeshi088~
20Kokeshi088Another great work! You're way better than I am.
I love how original you're poems are. Keep it up!
~Kokeshi088~
*another impossibly short review by Kokeshi088~
9/7/2003 c1 77ForgottenMists
Lurvely, lurvely. Lurvely poem. I like Pluto, tis an interesting planet. Neptune is cool too. :) Luvely lurvely. Shall shut up with the lurvelys. Lurvely.
77ForgottenMistsLurvely, lurvely. Lurvely poem. I like Pluto, tis an interesting planet. Neptune is cool too. :) Luvely lurvely. Shall shut up with the lurvelys. Lurvely.
9/6/2003 c1 ZealWarrior
You continue to impress me with your outstanding poetry; this was the best yet. I know it's hard to write a poem of this length and maintain the level of originality and continuity the previous stanzas possess, but you managed it very well. From the serene, beautiful description of each planet, which all differed in one way or another, to the flow of words that never really seemed forced; everything in this poem exudes a level of fantastic writing which is difficult to comprehend from such a young writer. PLEASE, do write more. I happen to be a fan of astronomy and really haven't read much on it save for my own poetry and yours, so it's good to read a poem about this nature from someone other than myself. GREAT GREAT WORK!
You continue to impress me with your outstanding poetry; this was the best yet. I know it's hard to write a poem of this length and maintain the level of originality and continuity the previous stanzas possess, but you managed it very well. From the serene, beautiful description of each planet, which all differed in one way or another, to the flow of words that never really seemed forced; everything in this poem exudes a level of fantastic writing which is difficult to comprehend from such a young writer. PLEASE, do write more. I happen to be a fan of astronomy and really haven't read much on it save for my own poetry and yours, so it's good to read a poem about this nature from someone other than myself. GREAT GREAT WORK!
9/6/2003 c1 9Misty Woods
BEAUTIFUL! You truly let me know more about the different planets in great detail. I especially liked Earth, Saturn, Uranus and Neptune. Great, vivid descriptions! Keep up the good work! :)
9Misty WoodsBEAUTIFUL! You truly let me know more about the different planets in great detail. I especially liked Earth, Saturn, Uranus and Neptune. Great, vivid descriptions! Keep up the good work! :)