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5/28/2004 c1 Beth
Good.
5/28/2004 c1 Beth
Good.
2/24/2004 c1 Rose Dark Thorn
So true...
9/7/2003 c1 35insanemonkeyboy
hey - another great poem. Thanks for the reviews, btw. You're an excellent writer - you portray your emotions through the words you choose very well. I love your expression
9/7/2003 c1 10Inoperative
i can just feel the love of humans here *grins* lol... it's good, *grumbles* as usual ;)... me, caden and fred and george are so sad: you're leaving broken wings behind... though caden thinks that word painter is a beautiful name (caden: not that broken wings wasn't!) and less depressing (so to speak) than broken wings...

but back to your poem (george: which is the idea of reviews...) *coughs* yes, thankyou fred *sniggers* (george: *glares* i'm george, the handsome one) pfft... *see's word painter waiting patiently for something resembling a normal review* i like the poem, it's great... the last lines are so abrupt, that is gives it more meaning... this poem was like a motorbike going full speed until suddenly it nearly ran over a kid and had to come screeching to a halt, your poem carried with it the same energy as say, a F1 (teehee)

Sheila: well, it was almost normal... oh and i brought Gob's album (fred: she wanted Afi's but no, they couldn't have it at the store could they?)

lol... enjoy the reviews, this being the first of tonight

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