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4/10/2005 c1 95beti213
wow... well done and great imagery. the "my lion, the archer" part seems a bit disjointed from the phrases before hand, but that's the only thing I could find (and I'm getting pretty good at finding stuff) well done.
5/16/2004 c1 36Songs of sorrow
Ahh very nice. It has a myserious imgage about it.
Great job
S.O.S x
9/6/2003 c1 2partypaprika
I really like your poem! The imagery is beautiful as well as touching! I hope to read more of your poems.

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