for Perpetual Motion4/10/2005 c1 
95beti213
wow... well done and great imagery. the "my lion, the archer" part seems a bit disjointed from the phrases before hand, but that's the only thing I could find (and I'm getting pretty good at finding stuff) well done.
95beti213wow... well done and great imagery. the "my lion, the archer" part seems a bit disjointed from the phrases before hand, but that's the only thing I could find (and I'm getting pretty good at finding stuff) well done.
9/6/2003 c1 2partypaprika
I really like your poem! The imagery is beautiful as well as touching! I hope to read more of your poems.
2partypaprikaI really like your poem! The imagery is beautiful as well as touching! I hope to read more of your poems.