
3/16/2004 c1
21Ancamna
I love it! It's so uplifting! Except I think lines 1-8 need some sort of puncuation.

I love it! It's so uplifting! Except I think lines 1-8 need some sort of puncuation.
9/6/2003 c1
1Sweetestbliss
Well, good poem. Nicely written. Better than anything I can write. Good job keep it up.

Well, good poem. Nicely written. Better than anything I can write. Good job keep it up.