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3/15/2004 c1 105KT-Me
i really liked this, an amazing attempt to capture what love really is...but no words can describe what love really is or feels like...
3/7/2004 c1 26Endless Nightmares
Wow!-
Strong piece here, Bob. Nicely done.
9/14/2003 c1 22JTierra1988
It's a really good poem well writen and everything. My problem is the content because you fail to talk about the problems and it makes me dislike the poem because it comes off as naive. I believe love includes dealing and accepting the good and the bad. I do really love what is there and agree with it I just think for titling it Love and leaving out such a crucial part is ..just not right. Great poem and I love how you have short lines saying so much ^_^ JMBunny
9/13/2003 c1 Lazerponies
It says so much in so few words (: Yay for really good poems! keep writing!
9/6/2003 c1 Needa S
Beautiful...Love is great when ya find that special someone...Excellent job! Keep writing...

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