for Using The Buddy System4/21/2011 c13 
2Abrasive
I really liked the premise for this story. All the stuff about bonded mages seemed really fun and original. Unfortunately, the execution left a lot to be desired. Your characters had no readily discernible personalities beyond the first chapter, and things developed at such a jumpy pace between them that it was difficult to get a read on anything that was happening. Next time, try to take it slower (a lot slower) and make sure your characters are behaving in the appropriate ways.
2AbrasiveI really liked the premise for this story. All the stuff about bonded mages seemed really fun and original. Unfortunately, the execution left a lot to be desired. Your characters had no readily discernible personalities beyond the first chapter, and things developed at such a jumpy pace between them that it was difficult to get a read on anything that was happening. Next time, try to take it slower (a lot slower) and make sure your characters are behaving in the appropriate ways.
11/22/2008 c13 1chazzybiatch
i love this story its so orginal!please update !
conveniently located but oddly out of place dining table
1chazzybiatchi love this story its so orginal!please update !
conveniently located but oddly out of place dining table
8/3/2007 c13 FreeDaChickens
This looks really interesting! The time difference twist was really interesting, along with them losing their memories. However, it would be nice to see what happens next . . . Are you going to ever update this? Because this is really good, and I'd love to see it continued!
FreeDaChickens
This looks really interesting! The time difference twist was really interesting, along with them losing their memories. However, it would be nice to see what happens next . . . Are you going to ever update this? Because this is really good, and I'd love to see it continued!
FreeDaChickens
1/10/2007 c13 3D.H. L'Orange
this is a really interesting story... you need to update it! i really want to know if the guys ever get their memories back (and Jamie and Tan get together) and if they ever overthrow the goblins.
: )
DH
3D.H. L'Orangethis is a really interesting story... you need to update it! i really want to know if the guys ever get their memories back (and Jamie and Tan get together) and if they ever overthrow the goblins.
: )
DH
11/4/2006 c13 yuki
Hi Chainlinks,
I really liked the premise of the story, the alternate world that you built is really interesting. And the characters are engaging too, I'm rooting for James and Taniel. However, I'm left with a fustrated feeling by the development of the relationship. Like stuff just keeps happening and we are getting no where fast. Taniel seems to like James on a deep level, but he also seems to really be happy and at ease with Montreal too. Sort of like a switch going on and off. and not sure what James is thinking and why he was a jerk to Taniel in the first place. also, the supporting characters are cool but we never get to know them much.
But all in all, it was an interesting read.
Hi Chainlinks,
I really liked the premise of the story, the alternate world that you built is really interesting. And the characters are engaging too, I'm rooting for James and Taniel. However, I'm left with a fustrated feeling by the development of the relationship. Like stuff just keeps happening and we are getting no where fast. Taniel seems to like James on a deep level, but he also seems to really be happy and at ease with Montreal too. Sort of like a switch going on and off. and not sure what James is thinking and why he was a jerk to Taniel in the first place. also, the supporting characters are cool but we never get to know them much.
But all in all, it was an interesting read.
12/4/2005 c8 56Porn Yesterday
Very good story so far, highly original from what I've read also. I hafta' say...LOVE the characters in this story, they're all so different and frikken' amazing to say the 'least!
...and now, I have to sleep, it's almost 12:00 AM and I have school tomorrow...=/
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Dead Bisexual
Look, it's a dead body...!
It's a girl...
Let's poke her boobs!
Morbid, am I not?
56Porn YesterdayVery good story so far, highly original from what I've read also. I hafta' say...LOVE the characters in this story, they're all so different and frikken' amazing to say the 'least!
...and now, I have to sleep, it's almost 12:00 AM and I have school tomorrow...=/
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Dead Bisexual
Look, it's a dead body...!
It's a girl...
Let's poke her boobs!
Morbid, am I not?
8/27/2005 c13 4Kakiryu
AUgh! You just left it there! Quick! Grab a pen or something and write! ...*sighs* Okay, nevermind. That was rather rude of me. Anyways, I really like this (obviously) and can't wait for the next update, but...take your time. Just get it done eventually, please?
Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao.
4KakiryuAUgh! You just left it there! Quick! Grab a pen or something and write! ...*sighs* Okay, nevermind. That was rather rude of me. Anyways, I really like this (obviously) and can't wait for the next update, but...take your time. Just get it done eventually, please?
Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao.
8/9/2005 c13 Ashye
Wow that was weird. I liked the beginning but it's kinda turned around a lot... I'm not saying I don't like it, because I think I do. It's just very confusing. Maybe it would make more sense if hsiri explained everything and they went back or something.
Wow that was weird. I liked the beginning but it's kinda turned around a lot... I'm not saying I don't like it, because I think I do. It's just very confusing. Maybe it would make more sense if hsiri explained everything and they went back or something.
7/29/2005 c13 16ola
...it's not ever yet, right? right? i've stumbled on this story a few times on other people's fav lists and finally decided to give it a go. glad i did, cause i like it =) and want to read more of it! so please update soon! =)
16ola...it's not ever yet, right? right? i've stumbled on this story a few times on other people's fav lists and finally decided to give it a go. glad i did, cause i like it =) and want to read more of it! so please update soon! =)
7/5/2005 c13 Fei
Ooh, i missed this update ^^;;Very nice. i can't wait to see what happens next!
Ooh, i missed this update ^^;;Very nice. i can't wait to see what happens next!
4/27/2005 c13 15Skyla Moon
Ah, lunch was no problem, but I had a hard time convincing myself to stop reading to go make it. I liked this a lot! Very interesting.
15Skyla MoonAh, lunch was no problem, but I had a hard time convincing myself to stop reading to go make it. I liked this a lot! Very interesting.
4/27/2005 c1 Skyla Moon
Haha this is excellent so far, of course. I wonder if it'd be safe to eat lunch while reading the rest of it. :P
Haha this is excellent so far, of course. I wonder if it'd be safe to eat lunch while reading the rest of it. :P
3/20/2005 c12 M L
haha, James. This is really amusing in some parts, but it seems unrealistic to have such an organized arguement. Things only turn out like that on childrens shows trying to teach impressionable five year olds about listening to each other and not fighting. Not all of it was like that, it just surprised me when everyone started listening to each other. My favorite part is the first few chapters, I thought those were the best. ^^
haha, James. This is really amusing in some parts, but it seems unrealistic to have such an organized arguement. Things only turn out like that on childrens shows trying to teach impressionable five year olds about listening to each other and not fighting. Not all of it was like that, it just surprised me when everyone started listening to each other. My favorite part is the first few chapters, I thought those were the best. ^^