for AQUARIUS10/10/2005 c1 
1x-TheSmallPrint-x
I like it. I like your more recent one a bit more though.I'm aquarius, too! ^.^
1x-TheSmallPrint-xI like it. I like your more recent one a bit more though.I'm aquarius, too! ^.^
8/7/2004 c1 14Dirty Wallpaper
ouch, god dmanit. when will hair dressers learn that hair in the clothes is not cool...
moving along, this poem was very interesting. it seemed to tell more than one story, more than two descriptions, it was very dimensional. i would have liked to see more images, more showing instead of telling to really convey your feelings and such. but other than that, i found it very gripping. good work, kudos!
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P:S - thanks so much for the reviews chica, you have no idea how much i appreciated them. very entertaining indeed ;). im toying with the idea of emailing you with my reply to your reviews or to put em here...decisions decisions! i think ill email you, knowing me ill get to a point where i just cannot shut the hell up. *strolls off to email...*
14Dirty Wallpaperouch, god dmanit. when will hair dressers learn that hair in the clothes is not cool...
moving along, this poem was very interesting. it seemed to tell more than one story, more than two descriptions, it was very dimensional. i would have liked to see more images, more showing instead of telling to really convey your feelings and such. but other than that, i found it very gripping. good work, kudos!
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P:S - thanks so much for the reviews chica, you have no idea how much i appreciated them. very entertaining indeed ;). im toying with the idea of emailing you with my reply to your reviews or to put em here...decisions decisions! i think ill email you, knowing me ill get to a point where i just cannot shut the hell up. *strolls off to email...*
9/11/2003 c1 9ElasStar
Omg! Wonderful!Beautiful! Blah blah blah! email me at if u want me to beta read for you!
9ElasStarOmg! Wonderful!Beautiful! Blah blah blah! email me at if u want me to beta read for you!
9/7/2003 c1 4Slideshow
powerful. and very good. You're 14? Are you for real? Man... I keep thinking Maymuna is 12 (it was the last time i checked before she told me) and that all of her friends were either 12 or 11... but 14? Ah, oh well. Anyway like i said earlier; powerful. Well written and... well, ya know. Keep it up.
4Slideshowpowerful. and very good. You're 14? Are you for real? Man... I keep thinking Maymuna is 12 (it was the last time i checked before she told me) and that all of her friends were either 12 or 11... but 14? Ah, oh well. Anyway like i said earlier; powerful. Well written and... well, ya know. Keep it up.