
3/1/2005 c1
23HeadofVecna
I think you meant either "through drenches" or "though drenched." Seems like either works better. Anyway, nice crisp disinterested yet not uninterested evaluation. The question (or personification) is a clincher in the portrayal of beauty. It all works.

I think you meant either "through drenches" or "though drenched." Seems like either works better. Anyway, nice crisp disinterested yet not uninterested evaluation. The question (or personification) is a clincher in the portrayal of beauty. It all works.
11/15/2003 c1
14Dirty Wallpaper
beautiful, utterly beautiful...the way you express so much in so few words is amazing, kudos!

beautiful, utterly beautiful...the way you express so much in so few words is amazing, kudos!
11/14/2003 c1 eddie
IT made me blink a little
IT made me blink a little
11/6/2003 c1
15lilacpaintedsky
wow... how did you all manage to capture the beauty of the lotus within 13! words?

wow... how did you all manage to capture the beauty of the lotus within 13! words?
10/18/2003 c1
48Sun Chime
wow! Beautiful. I love the rythm and flow. It seems so perfect and pretty. Good work.

wow! Beautiful. I love the rythm and flow. It seems so perfect and pretty. Good work.
10/4/2003 c1 NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly
XX um.. how do you get 20 + reviews for a poem less than 30 words? NOT FAIR!
lol uh... nevermind. getting carried away.
good poem though! =P
xtokx
XX um.. how do you get 20 + reviews for a poem less than 30 words? NOT FAIR!
lol uh... nevermind. getting carried away.
good poem though! =P
xtokx
9/15/2003 c1 beck
beautiful images, great word-use-an all over ten out of ten.
beautiful images, great word-use-an all over ten out of ten.
9/14/2003 c1
17Winged One1
This blows me away and I don't even know why! I don't understand like half the words...okay so maybe only cerise, and deign confuses me even though I know what it means. Heh I'm weird...I like this!
~winged one~

This blows me away and I don't even know why! I don't understand like half the words...okay so maybe only cerise, and deign confuses me even though I know what it means. Heh I'm weird...I like this!
~winged one~
9/11/2003 c1
267Lady B.V Rose
Its really soothing and peaceful but the last line gives it a sad hope, (That's not a bad thing, in fact its a brilliant thing). Perfect haikuetry (Is that a word? LOL) as always...I bow to your greatness (Or should I say curtsey? o.O;)
- Nicole

Its really soothing and peaceful but the last line gives it a sad hope, (That's not a bad thing, in fact its a brilliant thing). Perfect haikuetry (Is that a word? LOL) as always...I bow to your greatness (Or should I say curtsey? o.O;)
- Nicole
9/11/2003 c1 Carter Tachikawa-not logged in
Beautiful choices of words. Your syllables are right on the money. Excellent job, keep it up.
~CT
Beautiful choices of words. Your syllables are right on the money. Excellent job, keep it up.
~CT
9/11/2003 c1
106cosmo-queen
Excellent choice of words. You created some beautiful imagery. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

Excellent choice of words. You created some beautiful imagery. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*