Just In
for American Women

11/24/2004 c2 Jennacharm
This is interesting. I like how you characterize Jessica's nervousness.
2/8/2004 c2 Hele
This works well, and your style is unusual. You've portrayed the characters well.
12/18/2003 c1 41Flotom
very clever! this made me laugh! you're work is brilliant, i really admire it. you use very interesting views and perspectives and use words very well and carefully. Keep up the good work!
9/11/2003 c1 8Faiths Flower
I like the story so far, I thought it was going to be about something else, but it's good. I'm wandering where this'll go.. I don't exactly know what I like about it, but I just like it.

Your story is neat and easy to read. There are some out there that are horrendous in grammar, but hey, everyone has to start somewhere, I guess.. I definately did.

Rule 1: Accept Anonymous reviews. You'll probably get more reviews if you do.

:) Peace

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service