for American Women12/18/2003 c1 
41Flotom
very clever! this made me laugh! you're work is brilliant, i really admire it. you use very interesting views and perspectives and use words very well and carefully. Keep up the good work!
41Flotomvery clever! this made me laugh! you're work is brilliant, i really admire it. you use very interesting views and perspectives and use words very well and carefully. Keep up the good work!
9/11/2003 c1 8Faiths Flower
I like the story so far, I thought it was going to be about something else, but it's good. I'm wandering where this'll go.. I don't exactly know what I like about it, but I just like it.
Your story is neat and easy to read. There are some out there that are horrendous in grammar, but hey, everyone has to start somewhere, I guess.. I definately did.
Rule 1: Accept Anonymous reviews. You'll probably get more reviews if you do.
:) Peace
8Faiths FlowerI like the story so far, I thought it was going to be about something else, but it's good. I'm wandering where this'll go.. I don't exactly know what I like about it, but I just like it.
Your story is neat and easy to read. There are some out there that are horrendous in grammar, but hey, everyone has to start somewhere, I guess.. I definately did.
Rule 1: Accept Anonymous reviews. You'll probably get more reviews if you do.
:) Peace