for Elly's Dilemma10/7/2006 c10 DinaY
You have to continue! u cant just stop there! ah lol love ur story! please continue:)
You have to continue! u cant just stop there! ah lol love ur story! please continue:)
1/7/2006 c10 
7The Latest Plague
OPk... i know u havent updated in a year but can u PLEASE update? For me? ::makes puppy dog eyes:: i really think u've got something here with this story!
Peace, love, and mcr,
MFTS
7The Latest PlagueOPk... i know u havent updated in a year but can u PLEASE update? For me? ::makes puppy dog eyes:: i really think u've got something here with this story!
Peace, love, and mcr,
MFTS
9/2/2005 c1 BmmyBRxSx
lol i love this story... continue soon. btw... i hope u spelled Leonardo De Vinci name wrong on perpose... cuz the way u spelled it looked to wrong to be right. Leonardo Devin Chi... lol hes not asian. i dont even think the name Devin existed then only names like henry, Robert, Frances, mary, danielle, Louise... and so on. lol yes i know i was listing the names from the "ever after" book... but hey, im not going to go on and on about history and random books. this story is great ,and i think u really have something here. CONTINUE! and SOON(as in NOW!)!
lol i love this story... continue soon. btw... i hope u spelled Leonardo De Vinci name wrong on perpose... cuz the way u spelled it looked to wrong to be right. Leonardo Devin Chi... lol hes not asian. i dont even think the name Devin existed then only names like henry, Robert, Frances, mary, danielle, Louise... and so on. lol yes i know i was listing the names from the "ever after" book... but hey, im not going to go on and on about history and random books. this story is great ,and i think u really have something here. CONTINUE! and SOON(as in NOW!)!
6/8/2005 c9 turned off by your grammar
God, Jesus freaking christ I can't stand it anymore. I hate the freaking word "boo." Don't freaking use that word unless you want to sound like a complete MORON!
God, Jesus freaking christ I can't stand it anymore. I hate the freaking word "boo." Don't freaking use that word unless you want to sound like a complete MORON!
3/11/2005 c10 13XxDragon Princess NikkixX
*WOW* This is great. I think I might fall over with exhaustion from going through all those chapter but WOW. Amazing story! I'm loving it! Keep up the great work!
~Nikki~
13XxDragon Princess NikkixX*WOW* This is great. I think I might fall over with exhaustion from going through all those chapter but WOW. Amazing story! I'm loving it! Keep up the great work!
~Nikki~
1/1/2005 c10 3People's Victory
Hey there! It's been a while since I've checked back at this story and all I can say is it was my loss! I had to reread the whole thing, of course, and can I say that the little changes you've made help out the story heaps. It's always a pity, though - just when you really want to know what happens next, you come the end of the last chapter that's been posted so far. All I can say is I hope during these summer hols you find some time to post the next chapter, seeing as how you said you had it all planned out and such... ;)I reckon you're doing really well with the story. Last time I checked up on it, I think you said something about not being happy with where it was going, but I reckon you've made the most of what you've written so far and I wouldn't have it any other way :pOh, and the dance off was heaps way cool too! Nice detail.
3People's VictoryHey there! It's been a while since I've checked back at this story and all I can say is it was my loss! I had to reread the whole thing, of course, and can I say that the little changes you've made help out the story heaps. It's always a pity, though - just when you really want to know what happens next, you come the end of the last chapter that's been posted so far. All I can say is I hope during these summer hols you find some time to post the next chapter, seeing as how you said you had it all planned out and such... ;)I reckon you're doing really well with the story. Last time I checked up on it, I think you said something about not being happy with where it was going, but I reckon you've made the most of what you've written so far and I wouldn't have it any other way :pOh, and the dance off was heaps way cool too! Nice detail.
11/24/2004 c10 josie
its great i love the characteres please update
its great i love the characteres please update
11/22/2004 c10 1a moo
I loved it.. i read the whole story in a whole hour and well.. yeah i loved it..sometimes you got your tenses wrong or sometimes you swtiched.
eg:: wen u were writing from Alec's pov u sed he did this and he did that as well as i did this and that..
you did that in Elly's pov as well.. well update soon!
1a mooI loved it.. i read the whole story in a whole hour and well.. yeah i loved it..sometimes you got your tenses wrong or sometimes you swtiched.
eg:: wen u were writing from Alec's pov u sed he did this and he did that as well as i did this and that..
you did that in Elly's pov as well.. well update soon!
11/21/2004 c10 Chookstar
Holy damn was that chapter jam packed! That was awesome for a lack of better word, honestly that was the most fast moving/so much happened and you just couldn't help but keep reading then feel completely gutted at the end when it's done! I really can't wait for this next chapter - and keep in mind people are reading and just not always reviewing so don't get bummed by that!
Chookstar
Holy damn was that chapter jam packed! That was awesome for a lack of better word, honestly that was the most fast moving/so much happened and you just couldn't help but keep reading then feel completely gutted at the end when it's done! I really can't wait for this next chapter - and keep in mind people are reading and just not always reviewing so don't get bummed by that!
Chookstar
11/19/2004 c10 3fox of the night
hey, great chapter i love the drama and excitment. i couldn't stop reading. poor josie i feel her pain. and el i know what she's going through. well please come out with the next one soon.
3fox of the nighthey, great chapter i love the drama and excitment. i couldn't stop reading. poor josie i feel her pain. and el i know what she's going through. well please come out with the next one soon.
11/18/2004 c10 quietfool
I love this story! Please update soon, I want to find out what happens with Alec & Elly!
I love this story! Please update soon, I want to find out what happens with Alec & Elly!
11/18/2004 c10 Dina R
wow! that was... wow. very good chapter. wut the hell is up w/ Alec?update soon, ok?
wow! that was... wow. very good chapter. wut the hell is up w/ Alec?update soon, ok?
11/18/2004 c10 1Limegreenqueen
I realydid enjoy this chapter and this story but i only had one concern. When you were doing the scene with Elektra Jordane and terrell the way they spoke didn't seem reall to me. I'm think you were going for the "I'm from public school and ghetto" sterio type. it just didn't seem real to me. when you write a story i think that you should leave room for more imagination in people's lang. for example you could say they talked improperly but when writtng their diologe don't try to actually write those words improperlly. don't get me wrong i think that you should sometimes spell things wrong so that people would know what your talking about but try your hardest not to insult anyone.
thanks 4 writing , limegreenq7 aka Karla
1LimegreenqueenI realydid enjoy this chapter and this story but i only had one concern. When you were doing the scene with Elektra Jordane and terrell the way they spoke didn't seem reall to me. I'm think you were going for the "I'm from public school and ghetto" sterio type. it just didn't seem real to me. when you write a story i think that you should leave room for more imagination in people's lang. for example you could say they talked improperly but when writtng their diologe don't try to actually write those words improperlly. don't get me wrong i think that you should sometimes spell things wrong so that people would know what your talking about but try your hardest not to insult anyone.
thanks 4 writing , limegreenq7 aka Karla