for Gone11/14/2003 c1 
5Irrana
Your summary sparked my interest...
The poem 'gone' just kinda... came.
Humorous, and Im not quite sure if you meant to do that or not...
Your name perfectly describes this poem. Complexly simple... or simply complex, I'm not quite sure. But it jumps and its confusing. I like the concept but thats basically all i get out of it.
5IrranaYour summary sparked my interest...
The poem 'gone' just kinda... came.
Humorous, and Im not quite sure if you meant to do that or not...
Your name perfectly describes this poem. Complexly simple... or simply complex, I'm not quite sure. But it jumps and its confusing. I like the concept but thats basically all i get out of it.
9/9/2003 c1 ZealWarrior
Whether you want to hear it or not, I will reiterate, you're a great poet. Though this differs from the usual subject matter of your poetry (from the ones I've read, atleast), it is still fantastic. You have a definate way with words. Also, the unusual structure was pretty helpful in the overall feel of the poem, since the main character is sort of descending into madness and nothing is supposed to make sense. Again, some very nice description and word choice. Please keep it up Kettera, I can tell you will grow up to be an AMAZING writer! ...not that I'm saying you're not grown up...umm...gotta go!
Whether you want to hear it or not, I will reiterate, you're a great poet. Though this differs from the usual subject matter of your poetry (from the ones I've read, atleast), it is still fantastic. You have a definate way with words. Also, the unusual structure was pretty helpful in the overall feel of the poem, since the main character is sort of descending into madness and nothing is supposed to make sense. Again, some very nice description and word choice. Please keep it up Kettera, I can tell you will grow up to be an AMAZING writer! ...not that I'm saying you're not grown up...umm...gotta go!