9/30/2003 c1 19la nuit mes yeux t'eclairent
This is so pretty in a sad way. I love the allusions. The only sorry attempt I can make at constructive criticism (because it's so good already) is that I don't think you need to have the last line, it can only get worse from here, because doesn't something going downhill imply that on its own? Other than that, twas lovely! :)
those p(r)etty girls
This is so pretty in a sad way. I love the allusions. The only sorry attempt I can make at constructive criticism (because it's so good already) is that I don't think you need to have the last line, it can only get worse from here, because doesn't something going downhill imply that on its own? Other than that, twas lovely! :)
those p(r)etty girls