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4/12/2004 c1 5strangerofthelight
I love your writing. It flows smoothly..I wish that mine did.
I liked what I just read. What can anyone really say about poems? I'm not a big poem writer myself, but I have written 2...
Just off of the top of my head.
I bet I'll like the next one.
9/12/2003 c1 47Anjeni Windsinger
Beautiful poem...

"I shall miss you when you're gone

When the sunrise has stolen your glorious song"

Brilliant lines.. keep writing.
9/11/2003 c1 5KaiRei
Great!...I loved it! I always sit outside and stare at the moon to clear my thoughts and think things through. keep up the goods! ~Snki~
9/10/2003 c1 31Misfit toy 1016
i really liked this poem...the only cc i have is for the ending...i think there should be another line or something it ended really abruptly...but really good msg and such i like!

*~*Courtnie*~*
9/9/2003 c1 Joshua
Thats Gorgeous hun..

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