for Paradise Transformed9/10/2003 c1 
15BecomingMyself
Oh,please let me write like this about a "fairly ordinary garden"...
This is well written and very desrciptive, we as the readers are able to imagine the garden as the poem goes...
Nothing to comment on your writingskills, it is just good and well done!
15BecomingMyselfOh,please let me write like this about a "fairly ordinary garden"...
This is well written and very desrciptive, we as the readers are able to imagine the garden as the poem goes...
Nothing to comment on your writingskills, it is just good and well done!
9/10/2003 c1 69Lowell Boston
Excellent work. I'm not ordinarily a fan of rhyming poems, but yours works, both in rhythm and meter as well as visually and moving verse.
Thanks for posting,
Lowell
69Lowell BostonExcellent work. I'm not ordinarily a fan of rhyming poems, but yours works, both in rhythm and meter as well as visually and moving verse.
Thanks for posting,
Lowell