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1/10/2004 c1 20Kokeshi088
It is, yes, both eerie, and at the same time beautiful, complex, like I'm mourning,wanting, softly, speaking... never mind. I'm rambling random wrods now...
In other words, fantastic job!
*And for once, a LONGER review...*
11/13/2003 c1 3hamsta-boi
Yes i liked this poem because of the simplicity of the language and the way it seemed to flow. Now i decided to take up the offer of beta? Okay clikc on my name (obv.) and you could check out my fic ufo if you wanted, thanks.
10/6/2003 c1 17Winged One1

Oh my goodness, this is amazing...The entire first verse could've stood well alone. I like how you repeat each last line as the next first one, except for the very last two lines...to the Fav's list this one goes.

~winged one~
9/26/2003 c1 AVIGON
I think I like this one best. Even if it does sound like nowhere you've ever been before and nothing you've ever felt before, it still manages to sound familiar. And the way you played with the repetition makes me think every new stanza is another unopened door, and you just want to keep going and going and going. Nice work, really.
9/20/2003 c1 9Soul Rebel
Good imagery. It has motion, and yet it's almost as if it's time slowed down, the way you repeat the phrases. Mucho beuno.

Btw, thanks for the review- I felt the same way about the ending being to short and kinda hard to follow. Thanks for confirming it!
9/14/2003 c1 Claire
9/12/2003 c1 C.J. Tan
You are a great poet! This poem is a beauty.
9/12/2003 c1 50Alequinn
It's lovely! Such wonderful imagery. Haunting, almost. The last line has really a good effect. ^_^ Keep writing.

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