for Still Laughing?3/31/2005 c1 Shadowed Soul
Great song. The rythym did change auite a bit with the variations on the chorus but I found a solid tune that fitted it all in. Brilliant lyrics, especially the sarcasm and the rhetorical questions. I hope the people this is aimed at do actually read this. It might do something to bring them to their senses. But then I suppose that would require them to have hearts. So, not all that likely.
Great song. The rythym did change auite a bit with the variations on the chorus but I found a solid tune that fitted it all in. Brilliant lyrics, especially the sarcasm and the rhetorical questions. I hope the people this is aimed at do actually read this. It might do something to bring them to their senses. But then I suppose that would require them to have hearts. So, not all that likely.
7/4/2004 c1 soccerstar02
dat was me be4. im kewlio
dat was me be4. im kewlio
6/25/2004 c1 kewlio
hey...i like reviewing likw this...anyways...no...i dun think they're laughing ne more...
hey...i like reviewing likw this...anyways...no...i dun think they're laughing ne more...
1/14/2004 c1 
5Yaviewen
BTW: THIS IS YAVIEWEN! I changed my name. *.~
[cocks head]This is interesting. I wish my voices did what yours do. Mine just tell me to kill.
Cool song, though sometimes the rythem did get a little off.
5YaviewenBTW: THIS IS YAVIEWEN! I changed my name. *.~
[cocks head]This is interesting. I wish my voices did what yours do. Mine just tell me to kill.
Cool song, though sometimes the rythem did get a little off.
10/17/2003 c1 Mina Carlisle
This one is sad, but very good. Did the girl really kill herself? How terrible!
This one is sad, but very good. Did the girl really kill herself? How terrible!
10/15/2003 c1 keisha ali
i think u r a talinted song writer and u should definitely write more this is awesome i cant beleive how good this is
good luck 2 u
keisha ali
i think u r a talinted song writer and u should definitely write more this is awesome i cant beleive how good this is
good luck 2 u
keisha ali
9/15/2003 c1 Juli
HAPPY SONGS! WRITE HAPPY SONGS, MADDIE!
HAPPY SONGS! WRITE HAPPY SONGS, MADDIE!