for Dark Suits2/11/2004 c1 
3jester on the sideline
hm... very interesting, the dad thing though seemed a little...confusing? But I suppose it will work itself out once you've written more so please do! ^^
~*LWH*~
3jester on the sidelinehm... very interesting, the dad thing though seemed a little...confusing? But I suppose it will work itself out once you've written more so please do! ^^
~*LWH*~
2/6/2004 c1 6Little Monkey Child
Oh wow, great job! You detailed really nicely, and while the end wasn't a complete cliffhanger, it set up a great beginning. KEEP WRITING!
~Little Monkey Child
6Little Monkey ChildOh wow, great job! You detailed really nicely, and while the end wasn't a complete cliffhanger, it set up a great beginning. KEEP WRITING!
~Little Monkey Child
1/31/2004 c1 14Elise Justure
Ãt's nice i like it, but you need to structure it... and use paragraphs otherwise it can be confusing :) and BTW thanks for rating Shadow Reign.
14Elise JustureÃt's nice i like it, but you need to structure it... and use paragraphs otherwise it can be confusing :) and BTW thanks for rating Shadow Reign.
1/28/2004 c1 1MusicalMuse
Wow. Great start. Looks like its going to turn out well. I'll be checking up for more chapters ~The Muse
1MusicalMuseWow. Great start. Looks like its going to turn out well. I'll be checking up for more chapters ~The Muse
1/25/2004 c1 Lily Pierce
What an interesting beginning! Erin and Tamara's parts were adorable.. And now I want to know what the ending means. ^_^ I hope you'll post the next chapter soon!
What an interesting beginning! Erin and Tamara's parts were adorable.. And now I want to know what the ending means. ^_^ I hope you'll post the next chapter soon!