for The Latest Attraction3/4/2017 c22 Guest
Oh my god I can't believe I wasted my time reading all that bull. Jesus I honestly regret all that I wasted and I can't have it back. Thanks for the worst cliche ever. Clichés can actually be really unexpected in a way and beautifully written. This was none of them. This just -
Damn I'll just keep it PG. this made me want me want to pour acid in my eyes. Please at least find a badly written story that has a good storyline and make something from that cause your ideas suck.
Oh my god I can't believe I wasted my time reading all that bull. Jesus I honestly regret all that I wasted and I can't have it back. Thanks for the worst cliche ever. Clichés can actually be really unexpected in a way and beautifully written. This was none of them. This just -
Damn I'll just keep it PG. this made me want me want to pour acid in my eyes. Please at least find a badly written story that has a good storyline and make something from that cause your ideas suck.
3/2/2017 c22 
2bubublacz
Hi there! I guess it really is true that being in the right mood will make you enjoy the story.
Honestly, the first time I read this story a couple years back I couldn't quite connect with it.
But now, hot damn, it just hit me in the gut. I love the way the characters developments weren't done sloppily. I loved the way you described the feelings of Stella with so much emotion and angst. That masochistic love of Stella towards Armando had me thinking she was a fool but wishing for him to take notice of her. I love how the story didn't start with them hooking up.
I really enjoyed your story. Although, it would have been nice if we could hear Armando's thoughts. :D
2bubublaczHi there! I guess it really is true that being in the right mood will make you enjoy the story.
Honestly, the first time I read this story a couple years back I couldn't quite connect with it.
But now, hot damn, it just hit me in the gut. I love the way the characters developments weren't done sloppily. I loved the way you described the feelings of Stella with so much emotion and angst. That masochistic love of Stella towards Armando had me thinking she was a fool but wishing for him to take notice of her. I love how the story didn't start with them hooking up.
I really enjoyed your story. Although, it would have been nice if we could hear Armando's thoughts. :D
8/9/2015 c13 Jojo
im a big fan of Julian casablancas, and it seems you love the strokes and lou reed too, cool
love your story btw
im a big fan of Julian casablancas, and it seems you love the strokes and lou reed too, cool
love your story btw
2/2/2014 c1 1Pretend Jane
Wow rereading this reminded me of a lot of things I forgot like James who was mentioned in Mercedes' story! I also forgot how you described Stella. Looks-wise, mostly the hair and style maybe, Stella reminded me of these girls from a band I discovered not too long ago called Haim.
I just had to reread over this for Julian and now I'm tempted to read the whole thing again. Too bad I have work tomorrow...sigh.
1Pretend JaneWow rereading this reminded me of a lot of things I forgot like James who was mentioned in Mercedes' story! I also forgot how you described Stella. Looks-wise, mostly the hair and style maybe, Stella reminded me of these girls from a band I discovered not too long ago called Haim.
I just had to reread over this for Julian and now I'm tempted to read the whole thing again. Too bad I have work tomorrow...sigh.
4/23/2013 c22 16FairyTaleDreams
Great story. Stella is very self-destructive and Armando seemed very confused but you couldn't help loving them. :)
16FairyTaleDreamsGreat story. Stella is very self-destructive and Armando seemed very confused but you couldn't help loving them. :)
1/14/2013 c22 HeadOverHeelsInHate
Awww! I love this story! Hart and Stella have such a cute but complicated relationship. I kinda woner what happened with Lena though. Awesome story! Well written and planned!
Awww! I love this story! Hart and Stella have such a cute but complicated relationship. I kinda woner what happened with Lena though. Awesome story! Well written and planned!
12/27/2012 c1 AnonymousReads
This will forever and always be my favorite one of your stories. Great story. :)
This will forever and always be my favorite one of your stories. Great story. :)
12/2/2012 c22 Fallen Midnight Angel
This story is so sweet. The mood swings, fighting and the saying things they didn't mean had me gasping, and Blake and Stella's mom is so...evil.
This story is so sweet. The mood swings, fighting and the saying things they didn't mean had me gasping, and Blake and Stella's mom is so...evil.
10/9/2012 c19 mareecee
This story has been so well written but because it is near flawless any mistake (unfortunately) jumps out.
I just wanted to let you know that you have a small error in this chapter. "I don't want to talk about this HEAR of all places"
But that said, I loved this story! I read it all in one sitting. Writing a review here though, rather than the end, because I wanted to let you know about the "hear" and also because I think this is my favourite chapter. Armando is so vulnerable in it.
This story has been so well written but because it is near flawless any mistake (unfortunately) jumps out.
I just wanted to let you know that you have a small error in this chapter. "I don't want to talk about this HEAR of all places"
But that said, I loved this story! I read it all in one sitting. Writing a review here though, rather than the end, because I wanted to let you know about the "hear" and also because I think this is my favourite chapter. Armando is so vulnerable in it.
12/27/2011 c22 6ithinkyourgay
this story was beautifully written. i haven't found a good story on ficionpress in ages that has a good plot and very well written with minimal mistakes, although you always wrote my instead of may. i just wanted to let you know that you made my day and gave me hope in finding good stories to read and for you to continue on writing!
6ithinkyourgaythis story was beautifully written. i haven't found a good story on ficionpress in ages that has a good plot and very well written with minimal mistakes, although you always wrote my instead of may. i just wanted to let you know that you made my day and gave me hope in finding good stories to read and for you to continue on writing!
12/27/2011 c17 ithinkyourgay
they should just get together already. they are only hurting themselves by being apart.armando is just doing all that he can to push stella away, its so frustrating.
they should just get together already. they are only hurting themselves by being apart.armando is just doing all that he can to push stella away, its so frustrating.
11/29/2011 c22 xkcbby
This wasn't the most memorable story for me. I don't think it will be, but it was beautifully written. Armando and Stella's chemistry is stunning, and so is the depth of everyone's friendships. I must say that the relationship development between Armando and Stella was not perfect. Ok, so it was perfect in the sense that it had its ups and downs and built up gradually, but it did not contain the element of memorable in which you make me, the reader, fall hardly in love with your characters. I personally feel that was the only thing separating this story from making it something I will remember weeks, months, a year from now.
That aside, this was very well written. The grammar was flawless, the plot was good, and Armando is smokin' hot. All in all, I did enjoy this a lot and well, thank you for the lovely read.
This wasn't the most memorable story for me. I don't think it will be, but it was beautifully written. Armando and Stella's chemistry is stunning, and so is the depth of everyone's friendships. I must say that the relationship development between Armando and Stella was not perfect. Ok, so it was perfect in the sense that it had its ups and downs and built up gradually, but it did not contain the element of memorable in which you make me, the reader, fall hardly in love with your characters. I personally feel that was the only thing separating this story from making it something I will remember weeks, months, a year from now.
That aside, this was very well written. The grammar was flawless, the plot was good, and Armando is smokin' hot. All in all, I did enjoy this a lot and well, thank you for the lovely read.
10/27/2011 c22 fanficworm023
Its been awhile since a fic made me cry. I love how you write the story, it feels like im watching a movie right infront of me that the actors are really good were i could exactly feel there emotions every word they are saying... I always knew that HART loved her way back,eventhough he tells STELLA how much he loves LENA, I can still feel that there is something more than that. He is holding back same goes with STELLA. Love is really SOMETHING it concerns everything from simple facts to huge things that may change your life forever.
I love the story everything about it.
Its been awhile since a fic made me cry. I love how you write the story, it feels like im watching a movie right infront of me that the actors are really good were i could exactly feel there emotions every word they are saying... I always knew that HART loved her way back,eventhough he tells STELLA how much he loves LENA, I can still feel that there is something more than that. He is holding back same goes with STELLA. Love is really SOMETHING it concerns everything from simple facts to huge things that may change your life forever.
I love the story everything about it.