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6/16/2004 c1 51Kenya Bloodstone
Wow I know how this is all to well. Conker well done portraying your point. I put on a fake mask of peace and tranquility for the people around me as well. Good job. ~Kenya~
9/15/2003 c1 52Porphyrophobic Grape
this is really good, i cant totally relate, i havent got much else to say other than this is a really really beautiful poem!
9/15/2003 c1 9CocoBeans
OMG! This has got to be the best poem I've read today; and I've read a LOT today, all angst of course, that's my style. But wow, yes, you've conveyed those feelings so well. I feel that I can completely relate to them. It's so sad... but it so true. Sometimes I feel a lot like that too.. sometimes my smiles are hollow and lack happiness or even emotion.

But I loved your poem. You're just the kind of author I look for. On the favourites you go!

Toodles~
9/15/2003 c1 87me10
i really understand your poem. yey!

i like the whole idea about putting a mask on infront of other people to hide your true feelings, am i on the right track? great poem and great rhyming, welldone!

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