for Its not easy being evil1/7/2007 c6 
2Talerce
“The worst thing about heroes is that you can’t get them out of the carpet” Too true.
I am surprised that the story ended here. While it did have a definite plot, humor, characters, and all that...It was just too short! I am off to go check and see if you have a sequel by now.
2Talerce“The worst thing about heroes is that you can’t get them out of the carpet” Too true.
I am surprised that the story ended here. While it did have a definite plot, humor, characters, and all that...It was just too short! I am off to go check and see if you have a sequel by now.
1/7/2007 c5 Talerce
“Mr. Groll, now you’re just being sick.” Hahahaha! That is something I would do, just to gross people out.
It is nice to see the whole evil war effort picking up from the beaurocracy it was.
“Mr. Groll, now you’re just being sick.” Hahahaha! That is something I would do, just to gross people out.
It is nice to see the whole evil war effort picking up from the beaurocracy it was.
1/7/2007 c4 Talerce
Once again, the demon is the funniest character. Although the dumb hero and witches wasn't bad at all.
The conversation made me think of a scene that would be funny: Psychiatric help for dark lords. Help them get past their issues and kill with more enthusiasm and hate!
Once again, the demon is the funniest character. Although the dumb hero and witches wasn't bad at all.
The conversation made me think of a scene that would be funny: Psychiatric help for dark lords. Help them get past their issues and kill with more enthusiasm and hate!
1/7/2007 c3 Talerce
Sadly, I am just now realizing that this story has not been updated in a little over three years. Oh well.
This story is still as funny, and is tackling more areas for evil to mix with. Timeshares in hell and tourists make for pathetic travel. Hehe.
Sadly, I am just now realizing that this story has not been updated in a little over three years. Oh well.
This story is still as funny, and is tackling more areas for evil to mix with. Timeshares in hell and tourists make for pathetic travel. Hehe.
1/7/2007 c2 Talerce
You are wrong. This chapter is at least twice, maybe three times, as funny as the first. The demon henchman makes it hilarious. "I thought I would show some initiative". Heh.
You are wrong. This chapter is at least twice, maybe three times, as funny as the first. The demon henchman makes it hilarious. "I thought I would show some initiative". Heh.
1/7/2007 c1 Talerce
Hehehe. A good first chapter. I thought it was very funny. I was a bit wary of the typical goblins complaining about their job thing, but the parts after it definitely kept it fresh. I will have to read more.
Hehehe. A good first chapter. I thought it was very funny. I was a bit wary of the typical goblins complaining about their job thing, but the parts after it definitely kept it fresh. I will have to read more.
12/28/2005 c6 FromEastToWest
jeez! a lil late, i know i know.. i was just browsing this site for a bit of fun and i came across this. damn, this was a really good story. short and fun. :) it is really refreshing to read these things. i wonder why you didn't get a lot of reviews, this deserved it big time! well anyway, i really liked this. :D congratulations.
jeez! a lil late, i know i know.. i was just browsing this site for a bit of fun and i came across this. damn, this was a really good story. short and fun. :) it is really refreshing to read these things. i wonder why you didn't get a lot of reviews, this deserved it big time! well anyway, i really liked this. :D congratulations.
8/4/2005 c6 2Reasonably Crazy
This. Was. AMAZING.
The idea was brilliant. A great amount of evil coupled with an excellent amount of humor. The badgers... and the chair-
The ending was spectacular. I ADORED THIS.
Thank you for making my day completely shrouded in darkness.
There's a badger on my chair.
2Reasonably CrazyThis. Was. AMAZING.
The idea was brilliant. A great amount of evil coupled with an excellent amount of humor. The badgers... and the chair-
The ending was spectacular. I ADORED THIS.
Thank you for making my day completely shrouded in darkness.
There's a badger on my chair.
6/23/2004 c1 3Bitter Obsession
heehee, very funny! it's very original and even though i'm late for school now, it was definately worth reading, well done!
3Bitter Obsessionheehee, very funny! it's very original and even though i'm late for school now, it was definately worth reading, well done!
4/15/2004 c1 34Skiv
I'm LOVIN' this! It's great! Would do a longer review but I gotta go read the next chap- *Runs off to read*
34SkivI'm LOVIN' this! It's great! Would do a longer review but I gotta go read the next chap- *Runs off to read*
3/12/2004 c4 10DrunkenMonkeyKing
Oh gosh, Kidneb, this is friggin hysterical! Gosh if you have AOL IM me at DrunkenMonkey321 so I can tell you how good all this is. Funny stuff.
10DrunkenMonkeyKingOh gosh, Kidneb, this is friggin hysterical! Gosh if you have AOL IM me at DrunkenMonkey321 so I can tell you how good all this is. Funny stuff.
3/12/2004 c3 DrunkenMonkeyKing
Hell Time Shares. A vet being eaten by hellhounds, heroes locked in the privy, and of course, getting rid of those tourists that sole purpose is to torment the innocent of the earth. Genuis stuff I say.
Hell Time Shares. A vet being eaten by hellhounds, heroes locked in the privy, and of course, getting rid of those tourists that sole purpose is to torment the innocent of the earth. Genuis stuff I say.
3/12/2004 c2 DrunkenMonkeyKing
Ah yes, another part where I was laughing out loud were the following:
He grimaced. Of course, the new rules from the Brotherhood concerning cruelty to animals. He put down the bird, which scuttled off, and grabbed a turnip.
and of course:
“No, it’s not okay! It took me two turnips and a tomato to get a demonic being, will you…”
Another great chapter, though it did slow down at the end.
Ah yes, another part where I was laughing out loud were the following:
He grimaced. Of course, the new rules from the Brotherhood concerning cruelty to animals. He put down the bird, which scuttled off, and grabbed a turnip.
and of course:
“No, it’s not okay! It took me two turnips and a tomato to get a demonic being, will you…”
Another great chapter, though it did slow down at the end.
3/12/2004 c1 DrunkenMonkeyKing
I think I found a new favorite story! However, since they're are only six chapters, makes me kind of worry... What will I do when I run out?
Anyway, loved this chapter, the humor started out small but built with every phrase. There are few time when I actually read something capable of making me laugh out loud, but congrats! You pulled it off magnificently.
Love the characters, and moving on to the next chapter.
I think I found a new favorite story! However, since they're are only six chapters, makes me kind of worry... What will I do when I run out?
Anyway, loved this chapter, the humor started out small but built with every phrase. There are few time when I actually read something capable of making me laugh out loud, but congrats! You pulled it off magnificently.
Love the characters, and moving on to the next chapter.