for A House Without love9/21/2003 c1 
14SeraphEyes
Your paintings with words always strike cords in my heart. You really are Gifted. :wink:
14SeraphEyesYour paintings with words always strike cords in my heart. You really are Gifted. :wink:
9/17/2003 c1 AshleneSoul
When I read the title, I thought it would be something like MY house (Shh... don't tell my parents). But it's not - it's an even more pathetic situation. The poem is dramatic and meaningful, comparable to the other social realism kind of poems you have. It's beautiful that way and your points of view make sense. It's good that you are not closed to the outside world, but don't forget that it's not only filled with suffering, but with love and hope too. (I should be listening to myself).
When I read the title, I thought it would be something like MY house (Shh... don't tell my parents). But it's not - it's an even more pathetic situation. The poem is dramatic and meaningful, comparable to the other social realism kind of poems you have. It's beautiful that way and your points of view make sense. It's good that you are not closed to the outside world, but don't forget that it's not only filled with suffering, but with love and hope too. (I should be listening to myself).
9/15/2003 c1 9CocoBeans
Wow. Shieett... that was nice. I know EXACTLY how that feels like. *sigh* Well done. You've expressed this VERY well. And I agree there should be an Anger or Angst or Sadness section.. Pah! I always find it difficult to place my poems because they're all about Anger, Angst and Sadness. LOL
Good job! I'm adding this to my favourites!
Toodles!
9CocoBeansWow. Shieett... that was nice. I know EXACTLY how that feels like. *sigh* Well done. You've expressed this VERY well. And I agree there should be an Anger or Angst or Sadness section.. Pah! I always find it difficult to place my poems because they're all about Anger, Angst and Sadness. LOL
Good job! I'm adding this to my favourites!
Toodles!