5/23/2004 c1 26pneumothorax
Interesting, the way you wrote it. I like the concept of a conversation, on eat each end but found that some of the lines didn't read quite as well because it went from long ones to a short one which seemed really out of place. Personally, I don't agree with the views but you expressed them well. It was good :)

1/17/2004 c1 10mages-shade
There's a lot of teen pregnanciesin my school, and one of the people I know got pregnant. She kept thebaby and he's adorable. This poem is pretty accurate in how she felt about it and how it was taken by others.

11/14/2003 c1 38Twixt Realities
This was written in a really unique way. Especially the conversation in the beginning and end, very cool touch.

-Erica

10/29/2003 c1 8SugarCoatedPeaches
This is so true. I love your rhyme scheme. My cousin got pregnant not to long ago and had a baby girl. I can relate so much cuz she's only 16. Keep it up!

10/14/2003 c1 25Akuma Ameya
I agree with your opinion. A girl I know did the same thing. going to this particular school, beign at a disadvantage of any type is nearly fatal. I also respect her for her choice. I also like the way it is written as though speaking to the girl. very nice.

~Dangerous Motives.

10/12/2003 c1 16Bohemian Muse
first off, thanx for reviewing my photo haiku. anywho, on to MY review. although we may differ on the whole choice/life conflict, i do really like this poem. i especially like the conversation split in 2. but, i wouldn't explain myself at the end. you're taking all the fun away from reading it. the best thing about poetry for me is well, first, the emotion i get reading a good one, but the 2nd best thing is deciphering it and figuring out what it all means. try not to take that away from your readers.

9/15/2003 c1 6khakkinen
Wow, powerful stuff. I find that writing poems is the easiest way to express emotion and to let other people know how it's felt. Good work.