for Life is Beautiful5/11/2007 c1 chells
I was feeling a little jealous, so i thought i'd write my own...
my haiku:
There it goes again!
I'm too busy living life
to answer my cell.
by the way, your brother's 2nd line is only 6. :) hehe. I'm moving to a town called Haiku next month- maybe i'll send you something more inspired then. xoxoxo
I was feeling a little jealous, so i thought i'd write my own...
my haiku:
There it goes again!
I'm too busy living life
to answer my cell.
by the way, your brother's 2nd line is only 6. :) hehe. I'm moving to a town called Haiku next month- maybe i'll send you something more inspired then. xoxoxo
8/6/2004 c1 
5Thepolia
It's really interesting how you and your brother came up with two drastically different interpretation on the same topic. I'd like to read more of this! It's really cool!
5ThepoliaIt's really interesting how you and your brother came up with two drastically different interpretation on the same topic. I'd like to read more of this! It's really cool!
2/9/2004 c25 1Midnight Scribbles
Wow long haikus! i rarely see these! you really kno how to write them! i'm impressed... hey check out my "tears of angels" maybe you'll like it...
1Midnight ScribblesWow long haikus! i rarely see these! you really kno how to write them! i'm impressed... hey check out my "tears of angels" maybe you'll like it...
2/9/2004 c12 76CoolBeans18s
Hi! I'm BACK! *hugs* I've really missed all you guys.
The emotions in this poem are just so strong! You can really FEEL this. Its very powerful. WOnderful work!
~ CoolBeans18s
76CoolBeans18sHi! I'm BACK! *hugs* I've really missed all you guys.
The emotions in this poem are just so strong! You can really FEEL this. Its very powerful. WOnderful work!
~ CoolBeans18s
2/5/2004 c25 148JJR Meerraf
I loved this line!:
"From the humble wooden frame"
Great stuff, I wish I could play the guitar, wonderful work again! I like how you detailed the guitar with your words. Brilliant!
P.S.
I have now finally returned the favor of reading all your work! :) It's cool to read this much wonderful work but kind of sad too I guess, please keep writing! I'll be ready and waiting!
148JJR MeerrafI loved this line!:
"From the humble wooden frame"
Great stuff, I wish I could play the guitar, wonderful work again! I like how you detailed the guitar with your words. Brilliant!
P.S.
I have now finally returned the favor of reading all your work! :) It's cool to read this much wonderful work but kind of sad too I guess, please keep writing! I'll be ready and waiting!
2/5/2004 c24 JJR Meerraf
*sniff* I really like it, very romantic, or maybe I'm just in that sort of mood lately. But still it's wonderful. I love the flow, and the description, the anologies you use like over the Ocean and just different things like that. Wonderful work!
*sniff* I really like it, very romantic, or maybe I'm just in that sort of mood lately. But still it's wonderful. I love the flow, and the description, the anologies you use like over the Ocean and just different things like that. Wonderful work!
2/5/2004 c23 JJR Meerraf
I like the very first part, about flying. I think every human's dream is to fly, (well, almost everyone). Wonderful work! I love it!
I like the very first part, about flying. I think every human's dream is to fly, (well, almost everyone). Wonderful work! I love it!
2/5/2004 c22 JJR Meerraf
Great stuff! *Applause! Applause!* I loved it, great job in pointing those things out.
Great stuff! *Applause! Applause!* I loved it, great job in pointing those things out.
2/5/2004 c21 JJR Meerraf
I know exactly how that feels, it was one of my main down falls in spiritual life, I always beat myself up on things, but not anymore! Sorry, a huge bit of rambling there. It was an excellent poem!
I know exactly how that feels, it was one of my main down falls in spiritual life, I always beat myself up on things, but not anymore! Sorry, a huge bit of rambling there. It was an excellent poem!
2/5/2004 c19 JJR Meerraf
This sounds also like a continuation of the last one. Good work! (as always) :)
This sounds also like a continuation of the last one. Good work! (as always) :)
2/5/2004 c18 JJR Meerraf
Wow! *searches for words* just wonderful! You're such a unique writer! Some people will write a magnificent piece about love, or adventure, or something abstract, but it's been done before, no matter how good it might be, it's been done before. You find these different perspectives of things and different inspirations and you write these... unbelievable poems. Wonderful work!
Wow! *searches for words* just wonderful! You're such a unique writer! Some people will write a magnificent piece about love, or adventure, or something abstract, but it's been done before, no matter how good it might be, it's been done before. You find these different perspectives of things and different inspirations and you write these... unbelievable poems. Wonderful work!