for Molly Smiles6/23/2012 c29 
5iCY the Polar Kid
alkdfa;lksdf You killer! D:
How could you hurt me do damn much... So beautiful. I hate it so much that William's gone... From the beginning I knew he was going to die but damn that's too much. You killer!
Awesome sauce.
-iCY-
5iCY the Polar Kidalkdfa;lksdf You killer! D:
How could you hurt me do damn much... So beautiful. I hate it so much that William's gone... From the beginning I knew he was going to die but damn that's too much. You killer!
Awesome sauce.
-iCY-
1/9/2010 c29 fallenxalive
please please make a different ending!
it can't just end like that.
i stayed up all night (its 3:36am)
reading your story
and then boom hes dead
so i beg you please end it differently T_T
please please make a different ending!
it can't just end like that.
i stayed up all night (its 3:36am)
reading your story
and then boom hes dead
so i beg you please end it differently T_T
12/18/2009 c2 abbsi
So, I didn't really know what chapter to put this with, so I'll leave it here. Just an inconsistency to note: In this chapter, Molly says her dad died of lung cancer, but we meet him later.
So, I didn't really know what chapter to put this with, so I'll leave it here. Just an inconsistency to note: In this chapter, Molly says her dad died of lung cancer, but we meet him later.
9/4/2009 c29 Cafune
No matter how many times I read this, I always get so choked up at the end. I tell myself, he's going to die! He's going to die! I know what's coming, but it always makes me want to cry. I'd just like to tell you how wonderful this story is. I'm sure I've written other reviews for this story, but I still want to write another one.
No matter how many times I read this, I always get so choked up at the end. I tell myself, he's going to die! He's going to die! I know what's coming, but it always makes me want to cry. I'd just like to tell you how wonderful this story is. I'm sure I've written other reviews for this story, but I still want to write another one.
2/15/2009 c1 2pretitiful
like how yu ended the first chapter;
and .. i plan on staying here for a while
2pretitifullike how yu ended the first chapter;
and .. i plan on staying here for a while
2/4/2009 c28 4ThanksForTheEnd
Good story... But I cried at the end.
I also have to ask what would have happened in the alternate ending, seeing as I hate sad ones.
~Kira
4ThanksForTheEndGood story... But I cried at the end.
I also have to ask what would have happened in the alternate ending, seeing as I hate sad ones.
~Kira
11/5/2007 c29 Dina
Wah Why'd you let him die!
Wah Why'd you let him die!
9/9/2007 c29 6leaky pen
I was wondering, if you were to write an alternative writing, what would have happened?
6leaky penI was wondering, if you were to write an alternative writing, what would have happened?
6/3/2007 c29 4an-array-of-starlight
Ah, life.. An alternate ending would be nice, but in life there are no alternate endings. That's the good thing about stories. xD
4an-array-of-starlightAh, life.. An alternate ending would be nice, but in life there are no alternate endings. That's the good thing about stories. xD
5/13/2007 c29 12sunflowersing
PLEASE MAKE AN ALTERNATIVE ENDING! I can't stand it! Oh my god! Why can't they live happily ever after. I can't stop crying. I need to find a happy story before I turn out like Will... Oh my GOD! Oh MY FUCKING GOD! I'm so sorry for acting like this, but I feel like my world is going to end. My face is soaked with tears right now. I think I might be depressed for a very long time. Let me know if you know of any stories that would make me feel good. Again, I'm really sorry. It was a great story, but if you have it in you, could you really right a different ending? PLEASE? Thanks so much!
sunflowersing
12sunflowersingPLEASE MAKE AN ALTERNATIVE ENDING! I can't stand it! Oh my god! Why can't they live happily ever after. I can't stop crying. I need to find a happy story before I turn out like Will... Oh my GOD! Oh MY FUCKING GOD! I'm so sorry for acting like this, but I feel like my world is going to end. My face is soaked with tears right now. I think I might be depressed for a very long time. Let me know if you know of any stories that would make me feel good. Again, I'm really sorry. It was a great story, but if you have it in you, could you really right a different ending? PLEASE? Thanks so much!
sunflowersing
5/13/2007 c27 sunflowersing
WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO! GOD DAMNIT! NOW I'M SO FUCKING DEPRESSED! Sorry... didn't mean to go off on you like that. Please say this is a dream... I love you forever and ever!
sunflowersing
WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO! GOD DAMNIT! NOW I'M SO FUCKING DEPRESSED! Sorry... didn't mean to go off on you like that. Please say this is a dream... I love you forever and ever!
sunflowersing