for Molly Smiles1/13/2004 c29 
11jules2206
please please can we have an alternative ending! the one you've written is brilliant but I want them to be happy! pulease make it a happy ending..I really loved this story... its been totally awesome... thanks for writing it, BUBBA!
11jules2206please please can we have an alternative ending! the one you've written is brilliant but I want them to be happy! pulease make it a happy ending..I really loved this story... its been totally awesome... thanks for writing it, BUBBA!
1/11/2004 c28 6Tragedy is Love
a bit late to review but i hate you. but i'll read your alter ending. i don't want him to die...
6Tragedy is Lovea bit late to review but i hate you. but i'll read your alter ending. i don't want him to die...
1/11/2004 c29 Shadeofwhite
Maybe you could write an alternate ending, please? One where he survives, maybe? I know, it doesn't fit with the angst classification, but everyone loves a sappy ending, even guys. So, could ya?
Maybe you could write an alternate ending, please? One where he survives, maybe? I know, it doesn't fit with the angst classification, but everyone loves a sappy ending, even guys. So, could ya?
1/11/2004 c29 amazonwitchqueen
that was one hell of a story. youve almost got me crying. a surprising ending but one amazing story. you should write more.
that was one hell of a story. youve almost got me crying. a surprising ending but one amazing story. you should write more.
1/11/2004 c1 Misao
Darn, I totally forgot to explain that one. Saying her father died from lung cancer was purely an excuse to get him to quit smoking. Sorry for the mix-up!
Darn, I totally forgot to explain that one. Saying her father died from lung cancer was purely an excuse to get him to quit smoking. Sorry for the mix-up!
1/11/2004 c2 confused
I have read this b4 and in later chapters her father isn't dead. what is up with that?
I have read this b4 and in later chapters her father isn't dead. what is up with that?
1/10/2004 c29 AddADeleteFeature
You wouldn't understand how pissed off I am at tme moment! That was totally not KOOL!
BUt no offence i sorta saw it coming...I read WAY to much... any way it was a great storry(dispite the ending) and yea congagulatiuons
Starlight :)
You wouldn't understand how pissed off I am at tme moment! That was totally not KOOL!
BUt no offence i sorta saw it coming...I read WAY to much... any way it was a great storry(dispite the ending) and yea congagulatiuons
Starlight :)
1/10/2004 c4 2Merry Fairie
I really liked the contrast between "he" and his mom hehe.
That's all for now
~Merry
2Merry FairieI really liked the contrast between "he" and his mom hehe.
That's all for now
~Merry
1/10/2004 c29 cliffhangersareevil
well... that ending was good... but please make an alternate ending so we can know what would happen if he lived
well... that ending was good... but please make an alternate ending so we can know what would happen if he lived
1/9/2004 c29 Eleni
ok i know this story is done and you dont need any more reviews, but this is amazing. brilliant. its seriously one of the greatest stories i have ever read. i love the way you write, and you should definatly keep writing stories. good luck!
ok i know this story is done and you dont need any more reviews, but this is amazing. brilliant. its seriously one of the greatest stories i have ever read. i love the way you write, and you should definatly keep writing stories. good luck!
1/8/2004 c3 2Merry Fairie
Yes, I will be reviewing every chapter. I liked this chapter too. But I think if you rewrite it you should follow one of them home or something so that the readers get more attatched to the character. Anywho, good chapter!
~Merry
2Merry FairieYes, I will be reviewing every chapter. I liked this chapter too. But I think if you rewrite it you should follow one of them home or something so that the readers get more attatched to the character. Anywho, good chapter!
~Merry
1/8/2004 c2 Merry Fairie
Lol. Good chapter. I really like this story and I'm only on the first chapter. I think the characters reactions thus far are pretty realistic and I couldn't find any grammatical or spelling errors. I hope the next chapter is just as good... :-D
~Merry
Lol. Good chapter. I really like this story and I'm only on the first chapter. I think the characters reactions thus far are pretty realistic and I couldn't find any grammatical or spelling errors. I hope the next chapter is just as good... :-D
~Merry
1/8/2004 c1 Merry Fairie
I must say, I like the intro. I'm curious to how a sixteen year old is living alone. Excellent start, anyway. I think I'm going to have fun!
~Merry
I must say, I like the intro. I'm curious to how a sixteen year old is living alone. Excellent start, anyway. I think I'm going to have fun!
~Merry
1/8/2004 c29 10A Different Kind of Yellow
OMG! I can't believe he died! You made me cry! It was such a beautiful story! Could you continue with a second story about Molly and like 10 years later or something like that. I think you'd be just the writer to write a really good storyline like that. Congratulations!
10A Different Kind of YellowOMG! I can't believe he died! You made me cry! It was such a beautiful story! Could you continue with a second story about Molly and like 10 years later or something like that. I think you'd be just the writer to write a really good storyline like that. Congratulations!