
12/20/2003 c24
1Vincenza
Why aren't you updating? Have you lost your mind? Ya just don't leave a story there and don't write for 2 weeks! Please write more. The suspense is killing me... literally. And please don't have Will die. I love Will.

Why aren't you updating? Have you lost your mind? Ya just don't leave a story there and don't write for 2 weeks! Please write more. The suspense is killing me... literally. And please don't have Will die. I love Will.
12/14/2003 c24 unnamedpename
Very unrealistic and you use "set" instead of "sit" all the time but I like it, please continue!
Very unrealistic and you use "set" instead of "sit" all the time but I like it, please continue!
12/13/2003 c24
8Icefire2
So you know Molly's mother makes me want to thorw up, she is horrible! But as far as that bad feeling Jake got, will William try to kill himself again?

So you know Molly's mother makes me want to thorw up, she is horrible! But as far as that bad feeling Jake got, will William try to kill himself again?
12/12/2003 c24 shadowgirl618
daddy has a soft side too :( aw *sighs* its ok just please update soon. great chap btw.
-shadowgirl618-
daddy has a soft side too :( aw *sighs* its ok just please update soon. great chap btw.
-shadowgirl618-
12/12/2003 c24
40R. Blade
no! to short! her dad is sweet. that sounds about what it would be like if i were in her place. but, i have lots of problems. :(
~scars~

no! to short! her dad is sweet. that sounds about what it would be like if i were in her place. but, i have lots of problems. :(
~scars~
12/12/2003 c23 R. Blade
yay! an update! o, a gay friend. interesting. cant wait till next chapter! going there now...
~scars~
yay! an update! o, a gay friend. interesting. cant wait till next chapter! going there now...
~scars~
12/12/2003 c24 Julie
come on it was so short, please write more
come on it was so short, please write more
12/12/2003 c24
11jules2206
hey, great two updates, she really needs to hurry back before he does something stupid... please update soon, BUBBAI!

hey, great two updates, she really needs to hurry back before he does something stupid... please update soon, BUBBAI!
12/12/2003 c24 you do not suck so bad
way to go Misao! keep writting!
way to go Misao! keep writting!
12/12/2003 c24 acccountkiller
Oh..cute scene/as I said they should be hung anyway I shouldnt b online..lil angel that I am so I gtg...update soon and I'll review asap..tho that mite not be in a while. Lvoe, Mia
Oh..cute scene/as I said they should be hung anyway I shouldnt b online..lil angel that I am so I gtg...update soon and I'll review asap..tho that mite not be in a while. Lvoe, Mia