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11/21/2003 c11 you do not suck so bad
u see? there, that is much better! i have to say you did a great job in fixing chapter 9! and your chap 10 is really great too@! write more soon!
11/20/2003 c11 BreeJalil
This is real good, yes it sure is, are they going to get in trouble? :P
11/15/2003 c10 oggabooga
aw! Actually in a way I'm ind of sarcastic and up beat as Molly and my boyfriend is kind of like Wil, cause he's so sacastic and sad alot, but usually I can make him laugh and out of that bad mood of his. I love your story! It's really good, keep writing
11/15/2003 c10 you suck so bad
why the hell did you do that? you could have made them fall gradually inlove and had molly change him. but no. he says three sentences about his life and then they have sex. you really suck you know that? can't you at least rewrite the chapter?
11/14/2003 c10 2Hearts Goddess
Love it! Update soon!
11/14/2003 c10 Jordan
Hey...I really liked your story so far. I think you're a good writer too. By the way...something was annoying me. It's "sit", not "set"...you set someone down, you sit down. Okay. Now that that's over =\ Good job...personally I like William, but Molly's alright. She just seems sort of preppy from my perspective. Even if she's been saying she isn't throughout the story. ~_~ Heh. Well anyways continue on..I'll keep reading.

-Jordan

"Pain and pleasure are seperated only by perception..."
11/14/2003 c10 16anti-you
WOW! i love this! its wondeful! PLEASE KEEP GOING I NEED TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT!
11/13/2003 c10 Queen of Twilight
hey! sry for the late review...isnt it a bit rushed...nah..really good. But please hurry with the next chapter now...Molly's parents r...gr..Will's father is...no comment. Well please hurry up with updates, I lvoe this story! Love and good luck, Mia
11/13/2003 c10 11jules2206
amazing update really liked it, bless 'em, anyway please update soon, i wanna see what happens next! bubbai!
11/13/2003 c10 6Tragedy is Love
they did that standing up? well...

anyway, very uh, interesting. i guess they are finally together right? hehehe, so cute!
11/12/2003 c10 Carina
Damn this is good.
11/12/2003 c10 2Night of the Raven
love the story. continue soon.
11/6/2003 c9 6Tragedy is Love
why the hell did he do that? he's an idiot. but it's getting interesting.

does the reason have anything to do with his goth image, like being pale and stuff
11/6/2003 c9 NeverEndingQuest
YAYAYAYAYAY! YOU WROTE MORE!I'm so happy! ^_^
11/6/2003 c9 mickey
COL :)
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