for Scarred12/2/2003 c1 
7She's a Star
Wow. That was . . . utterly striking and sad. Beautifully expressed, and the last line was absolutely perfect - I nearly stopped breathing.
Amazing.
7She's a StarWow. That was . . . utterly striking and sad. Beautifully expressed, and the last line was absolutely perfect - I nearly stopped breathing.
Amazing.
11/30/2003 c1 17Jane Tay
this is really good.i want to offer more, but i dont no wot?
i like the way u've used the brakets 4 ur thoughts quietly.
but mostly i just really liked the poem, being on the other side, being this side.
well done, uve done it, got sum1 into ur poem!
and its great.
17Jane Taythis is really good.i want to offer more, but i dont no wot?
i like the way u've used the brakets 4 ur thoughts quietly.
but mostly i just really liked the poem, being on the other side, being this side.
well done, uve done it, got sum1 into ur poem!
and its great.
11/24/2003 c1 Hindi Sad Diamonds
Your heart does come out in this, darling. Your words hold a lot of emotion, and show what an amazing writer and poet you are. This is very sad, and very sweet.
"you’re not the only one you’re
((scarring))"
That is a brilliant way to end the poem. It adds so much feeling, and really lets us know how you feel. I'm sorry, sweetie. I hope you're okay- this is absolutely gorgeous, and incredibly well written.
Please, don't ever stop writing.
~ Cinna.
Your heart does come out in this, darling. Your words hold a lot of emotion, and show what an amazing writer and poet you are. This is very sad, and very sweet.
"you’re not the only one you’re
((scarring))"
That is a brilliant way to end the poem. It adds so much feeling, and really lets us know how you feel. I'm sorry, sweetie. I hope you're okay- this is absolutely gorgeous, and incredibly well written.
Please, don't ever stop writing.
~ Cinna.
11/23/2003 c1 PepsiAngel
Okay. Yeah.
Major tears.
*hugs* Oh, dear, that was heartbreaking. I'm so sorry you had to go through that.
xCryssa
Okay. Yeah.
Major tears.
*hugs* Oh, dear, that was heartbreaking. I'm so sorry you had to go through that.
xCryssa
11/21/2003 c1 7Demeter Rose
O! *kicks self for not having read more of your poetry* you keep getting better and better. I like the echos-I guess they could be called echoes. They make it seem like a song. I can hear the guitar chords in my head.
7Demeter RoseO! *kicks self for not having read more of your poetry* you keep getting better and better. I like the echos-I guess they could be called echoes. They make it seem like a song. I can hear the guitar chords in my head.
11/4/2003 c1 Sunlit Rain
Oh, very nice. I really like the way you structured this poem and I especially like the wording in parenthesis-it's important for that to be meaningful and it is, in a way that truly furthers the piece. Keep it up girl! :)
Oh, very nice. I really like the way you structured this poem and I especially like the wording in parenthesis-it's important for that to be meaningful and it is, in a way that truly furthers the piece. Keep it up girl! :)
10/16/2003 c1 keng
me too
i loved it
and.. i understand it.
and
me too
i loved it
and.. i understand it.
and
10/2/2003 c1 PainKiller
Truly fantastic... certainly your most powerful poem. The words inside the double parentheses only added to the effect. Honestly, you need to keep writing poetry... you outshine me in every way. The emotion is just flowing here... extremely vivid; that's for sure. As usual, an excellent, excellent job.
Truly fantastic... certainly your most powerful poem. The words inside the double parentheses only added to the effect. Honestly, you need to keep writing poetry... you outshine me in every way. The emotion is just flowing here... extremely vivid; that's for sure. As usual, an excellent, excellent job.
9/22/2003 c1 217MistrissD
daamn girl, that was so amazing, I love the words in the (()) thingies, hehe nice description huh? It flowed so nicely and was just so amazing, ack I cant even say how much I loved this
217MistrissDdaamn girl, that was so amazing, I love the words in the (()) thingies, hehe nice description huh? It flowed so nicely and was just so amazing, ack I cant even say how much I loved this
9/19/2003 c1 64Black Tangled Heart
Oh wow...
Mary Helen, that was truly, truly breathtaking.
I nearly cried.
Oh darling, I love you so much.
Stay strong.
*hug*
64Black Tangled HeartOh wow...
Mary Helen, that was truly, truly breathtaking.
I nearly cried.
Oh darling, I love you so much.
Stay strong.
*hug*
9/18/2003 c1 3PeachPawz
Wow. That was absolutely BRILLIANT! You MUST start writing more poetry! Utterly fantastic! :D
~Peach
3PeachPawzWow. That was absolutely BRILLIANT! You MUST start writing more poetry! Utterly fantastic! :D
~Peach
9/18/2003 c1 7fool-of-a-took2
I *love* the format you used! And how all of the words in parenthasis are words that start with "s" is BRILLIANT! I love it! Why do you always have all of the good ideas? ::harumph::
7fool-of-a-took2I *love* the format you used! And how all of the words in parenthasis are words that start with "s" is BRILLIANT! I love it! Why do you always have all of the good ideas? ::harumph::
9/18/2003 c1 54Cal Miskimen
Holy Crap! Natasha, Natasha, Natasha. I cannot believe that you've done it again! You have captured me! That piece was awsome! You will forever stay on my Author Alert! Gosh, I cannot get over it. Keep on going, you have GREAT potential.
54Cal MiskimenHoly Crap! Natasha, Natasha, Natasha. I cannot believe that you've done it again! You have captured me! That piece was awsome! You will forever stay on my Author Alert! Gosh, I cannot get over it. Keep on going, you have GREAT potential.
9/18/2003 c1 BeSummerRain
Oh, wow.
It's so...vivid...and original...and REAL.
Wonderful, m'dear.
I also love the format - with the words in parentheses and all. It's just...cool.
Oh, wow.
It's so...vivid...and original...and REAL.
Wonderful, m'dear.
I also love the format - with the words in parentheses and all. It's just...cool.