
11/9/2003 c1
114The Cheshire Kitten
That's so sad. The rhythmicity of the was so fast, and paradoxically, that kind of added to the melancholy of the poem. From another depressed person's point of view, I can relate and it's a great poem!

That's so sad. The rhythmicity of the was so fast, and paradoxically, that kind of added to the melancholy of the poem. From another depressed person's point of view, I can relate and it's a great poem!
10/12/2003 c1
25suicidel angel
can relate to this, nicely written, the repetition made an effective point.

can relate to this, nicely written, the repetition made an effective point.