for Shards of Light3/28/2004 c6 
47myfishpajamas
I started reading this awhile ago and I just never got around the reviewing. Or finishing it. I don't have time to do the latter today either but I'll get around to it. So far though, I really like it. The characters are interesting and I especially enjoyed this chapter. Keep up the good work.
47myfishpajamasI started reading this awhile ago and I just never got around the reviewing. Or finishing it. I don't have time to do the latter today either but I'll get around to it. So far though, I really like it. The characters are interesting and I especially enjoyed this chapter. Keep up the good work.
1/28/2004 c18 Kathy Si
i have a penguin-lost sanity shirt, strange coincidences
anyway, nice story
i guess i'll start reading the sequel
-neph
i have a penguin-lost sanity shirt, strange coincidences
anyway, nice story
i guess i'll start reading the sequel
-neph
1/28/2004 c17 Kathy Si
Jessie..Radley..Hunter..Keith..shit i can't keep track of every one
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nice chapter.
-neph
Jessie..Radley..Hunter..Keith..shit i can't keep track of every one
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nice chapter.
-neph
1/28/2004 c15 Kathy Si
I figure after the accident kiss and everything Radley would get over Keith.
or commit suicide
i'm sure it's not to bad, dying is a logical solution
I figure after the accident kiss and everything Radley would get over Keith.
or commit suicide
i'm sure it's not to bad, dying is a logical solution
1/28/2004 c14 Kathy Si
Who's mike again?
his 'cousin'?
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you know, Radley one fucked character
he shouldn't care so much about getting together with someone
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i've sworn off guys and girls, it makes everything a lot less complex
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oh, and the story is a little twisted, but i'll keep reading
just cause it's still a good story, and i want to know how it ends
-Neph
Who's mike again?
his 'cousin'?
-
you know, Radley one fucked character
he shouldn't care so much about getting together with someone
-
i've sworn off guys and girls, it makes everything a lot less complex
-
oh, and the story is a little twisted, but i'll keep reading
just cause it's still a good story, and i want to know how it ends
-Neph
1/27/2004 c13 Kathy Si
Jessie...that was unexpected, and Zachary and the other guy
Sheesh, you really like to screw around with your characters, but it works.
Jessie...that was unexpected, and Zachary and the other guy
Sheesh, you really like to screw around with your characters, but it works.
1/27/2004 c9 Kathy Si
Zachary seems nice, i don't know what's going to happen between Radley on him, them maybe going to be cousins and everything.
I have 49, yes 49, first cousins, 56, if you include my step cousins, so I think it would be really strange if they got together. I'm basing this on my relationships with my cousins.
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great chapter, I'll continue reading now.
Zachary seems nice, i don't know what's going to happen between Radley on him, them maybe going to be cousins and everything.
I have 49, yes 49, first cousins, 56, if you include my step cousins, so I think it would be really strange if they got together. I'm basing this on my relationships with my cousins.
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great chapter, I'll continue reading now.
12/15/2003 c18 39Naatz
I like it. A lot. A real lot. Your grammar and spelling could have been better, sure.
It's so pretty. Nothing seems strained, even when thinking of the size of it. Your chracters are wonderful, especially Radley. He's real. He's lit some kind of curiousity inside me. The story itself is interesting. I read every chapter gladly; it wasn't like most stories, when there were chapters that just . . . relatively sucked. Your story has a stable flow. It's all the same. It's all good as it first was.
I'll keep reading, for sure. :) Thanks for a wonderful read.
|Meduza|
39NaatzI like it. A lot. A real lot. Your grammar and spelling could have been better, sure.
It's so pretty. Nothing seems strained, even when thinking of the size of it. Your chracters are wonderful, especially Radley. He's real. He's lit some kind of curiousity inside me. The story itself is interesting. I read every chapter gladly; it wasn't like most stories, when there were chapters that just . . . relatively sucked. Your story has a stable flow. It's all the same. It's all good as it first was.
I'll keep reading, for sure. :) Thanks for a wonderful read.
|Meduza|
11/1/2003 c18 19NotEnough
LOL, it gets MORE confusing...isn't that a little backwards? ahh well, i shall await for the sequal and see for myself.
XD.
19NotEnoughLOL, it gets MORE confusing...isn't that a little backwards? ahh well, i shall await for the sequal and see for myself.
XD.
10/31/2003 c18 newtypeshadow
date him! date him! (him = keith) :sigh:
i really like this story. it's so much more high school and normal that what i usually find. the characters are everyday people, with their own normal-people hang-ups, and much like real life, things haven't magically fixed themselves by the end of the story...or this part, at least...
i really should have reviewed 2 chapters ago, when i started reading - don't hurt me! :cringe: anyways, i'm really glad you updated so quickly, and i'm really glad i read this. please write the sequels soon! (and quickly. because i'm impatient. and i blame you. ^_^)
date him! date him! (him = keith) :sigh:
i really like this story. it's so much more high school and normal that what i usually find. the characters are everyday people, with their own normal-people hang-ups, and much like real life, things haven't magically fixed themselves by the end of the story...or this part, at least...
i really should have reviewed 2 chapters ago, when i started reading - don't hurt me! :cringe: anyways, i'm really glad you updated so quickly, and i'm really glad i read this. please write the sequels soon! (and quickly. because i'm impatient. and i blame you. ^_^)
10/31/2003 c18 Nanya
Nice story you've got there :) I only found it recently and I was so happy when you updated so frequently! ^^ And I can't wait for the sequels. ^^
A cookie for the author ;)
Nice story you've got there :) I only found it recently and I was so happy when you updated so frequently! ^^ And I can't wait for the sequels. ^^
A cookie for the author ;)