for MoonWalkers: Demon Child12/23/2003 c3 
12MoonDaughter17
This was prett cool. I'll see if I can finish reading Moonwalkers: Meet the End by the end of the week and then I'll review that one. Well, bye.
12MoonDaughter17This was prett cool. I'll see if I can finish reading Moonwalkers: Meet the End by the end of the week and then I'll review that one. Well, bye.
10/12/2003 c3 1freddybabe19
Hey, Mary Kate. Don't you be tellin' me to write more reviews. I messed up and ended up limiting myself to only one at the time. So Mandi... what's new? Besides the ricotta cheese stain on Pizzas by Evan's floor! LOL! Dahlin', I've known you for years and I still don't know where you get this stuff from! However, I do agree with Mary Kate. Why are her friends so calm? Kinda bothers me. Anyway... Freddy Rules! Shall we also make a peace treaty? The treaty is not a resignation of our love for him... it is an agreement that we disagree. It also states that we will no longer fight over him. We'll each get to him in our own way... and let him decide! Deal? LYLAS, hun. Awesome story. Cyaround! Biz ~{'*'}~ (that's sposed to be a cat, but yeah right!
P.S: Workin' on a new series and poem! We need to take a walk!
1freddybabe19Hey, Mary Kate. Don't you be tellin' me to write more reviews. I messed up and ended up limiting myself to only one at the time. So Mandi... what's new? Besides the ricotta cheese stain on Pizzas by Evan's floor! LOL! Dahlin', I've known you for years and I still don't know where you get this stuff from! However, I do agree with Mary Kate. Why are her friends so calm? Kinda bothers me. Anyway... Freddy Rules! Shall we also make a peace treaty? The treaty is not a resignation of our love for him... it is an agreement that we disagree. It also states that we will no longer fight over him. We'll each get to him in our own way... and let him decide! Deal? LYLAS, hun. Awesome story. Cyaround! Biz ~{'*'}~ (that's sposed to be a cat, but yeah right!
P.S: Workin' on a new series and poem! We need to take a walk!
10/11/2003 c3 5OutlawEris
I'm telling Mr. Kreckie! *points and laughs* jk. jk. I don't stoop THAT low as a suck-up. lol.
But anyways, you are EVIL! CLIFFHANGERS ARE EVIL! (almost as evil as the annoying little demon child you put in there. heehee) I know somebody who laughs just like that, y'know?
So if Aris isn't human, what is she? Gargh! TELL ME OR DIE! (jk. jk)
Well, now you HAVE to update soon, or i will lose all patience with you and torment you constantly during all school and practice hours and pester you nightly w/ at least three score threatening e-mails. *just kidding about that. I'm not a psycho-yet* hehe.
Since I seem to have trouble getting my point across (see English paper for details) i'll be blunt:
Update soon!
5OutlawErisI'm telling Mr. Kreckie! *points and laughs* jk. jk. I don't stoop THAT low as a suck-up. lol.
But anyways, you are EVIL! CLIFFHANGERS ARE EVIL! (almost as evil as the annoying little demon child you put in there. heehee) I know somebody who laughs just like that, y'know?
So if Aris isn't human, what is she? Gargh! TELL ME OR DIE! (jk. jk)
Well, now you HAVE to update soon, or i will lose all patience with you and torment you constantly during all school and practice hours and pester you nightly w/ at least three score threatening e-mails. *just kidding about that. I'm not a psycho-yet* hehe.
Since I seem to have trouble getting my point across (see English paper for details) i'll be blunt:
Update soon!
10/10/2003 c2 5OutlawEris
Another marvelous job! *claps* But I do have one little piece of constructive criticism. It was kinda of odd that her friends just accepted that a voice was telling Aris about the end of the world. I think maybe they should have been a bit more shocked. But are they also "MoonWalkers"? Is that why they get it?
Anyways, I like how she sits in the tree for that long time and just thinks about things. That was a cool scene.
And the description of her surroundings right around 5:30 was awesome, Traveling Buddy! Kudos to you! lol.
*claps* Yay! Awesome chapter! *pause* Now where's the 3rd part?
5OutlawErisAnother marvelous job! *claps* But I do have one little piece of constructive criticism. It was kinda of odd that her friends just accepted that a voice was telling Aris about the end of the world. I think maybe they should have been a bit more shocked. But are they also "MoonWalkers"? Is that why they get it?
Anyways, I like how she sits in the tree for that long time and just thinks about things. That was a cool scene.
And the description of her surroundings right around 5:30 was awesome, Traveling Buddy! Kudos to you! lol.
*claps* Yay! Awesome chapter! *pause* Now where's the 3rd part?
10/10/2003 c1 OutlawEris
Well, that was a morbid little fic! lol. just kidding, M*. That was great writing. My traveling buddy has some skill! lol.
But it was cool. Scary, and it makes me wonder what's behind that happy expression (jk), but it really set a great mood. Especially the teacher part. hehe. liked that.
Great job! Now why don't you have any more reviews? *scowls and points bossy finger* All who have not read - do so now!
Well, that was a morbid little fic! lol. just kidding, M*. That was great writing. My traveling buddy has some skill! lol.
But it was cool. Scary, and it makes me wonder what's behind that happy expression (jk), but it really set a great mood. Especially the teacher part. hehe. liked that.
Great job! Now why don't you have any more reviews? *scowls and points bossy finger* All who have not read - do so now!